|Reviews for The Lady Boss and the Silver Fox|
| Account Killer Old Account88 chapter 4 . 9/19/2016
Love this but I have to point out something. I'm a Marine brat and wife and retired Marines will get PISSED if you use the term ex Marine...even jokingly. Ex Marines were those who were kicked out, retired Marines are called former Marines...hence the saying Jenny uses in this chapter, "there's no such thing as an ex Marine". Ex Marines aren't considered Marines by former Marines. Called my dad an ex Marine once...he almost sent me to Gitmo. Lol Those guys are sensitive about their terminology. Even though she's clearly joking...Gibbs of all people would have called her on what she said. Loved the use of the Marine Corps hymn...reminded me of when my dad taught it to me and I annoyed my mom with it for months. Lol
Amazing story. I love it. I actually think your Gibbs is more of a believable former Marine then Gibbs on the show.
| Holly Kesley chapter 4 . 9/2/2016
Oh, please. As if. Jerry Maguire (as I'm sure I probably answered the first time around). ;) REALLY enjoying my re-reading of your awesomeness. It is actually a much-needed distraction. The greatest, most incredible weekend of my life got followed up by what has seriously been the crappiest week ever. So thanks. :)
| JamJar98 chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
LOVED this story so much.
| Loads of Randomness chapter 14 . 8/6/2013
OMG BRILLIANHT ENDING!
| Loads of Randomness chapter 13 . 8/6/2013
OH YEAH! JIBBS FOREVER BRILLIANT! I love how Gibbs proposed.
Favourite lines ""Oh, damn," sighed Kelly forlornly. "You've finally killed my father, haven't you?"
"Whatever would possess you to ask that?"
"Well, you're smiling."" lol
""Gunny gave me a diamond. He's going to marry me. Know what that means?"
"GRANPA IS NOT IN CHARGE ANYMORE!" screamed Levi, jumping up and then throwing his arms around Jenny's neck, soaking her all over again." I wasn't aware he was in charge at all
""I am aware that what I am about to say may shock you; it maybe be almost unbelievable: I am not a virgin."" no, seriously?
| Loads of Randomness chapter 11 . 8/6/2013
goes away and cries a bit
WHY ARE YOU SUCH A GOOD WRITER. I BAWLED AT THIS CHAPTER AND STILL COME BACK FOR MORE!
Favourite line: ""It is common courtesy not to leave your lover naked in a bed where five-year-olds can find her," she whispered, releasing him and letting him slowly stand up. He looked at her, wincing a little." it does tend to be
""I might fall in love with you," she said simply.
Taken aback by the honesty for the merest of seconds, Jethro grinned.
"That'll be the day," he growled
She smacked her hand against his thigh, a genuine smile breaking over her face as a laugh escaped her lips." awwwwws
| Loads of Randomness chapter 10 . 8/6/2013
Yay! Levi's birthday, so cute!
Favourite lines: ""Rule twelve," she stated, "Never date a coworker. But, alas, Jethro, I just don't have it in my gentle little heart to let them know that they are not, in fact, pulling the wool over my eyes and/or being subtle. I find it much too cute that they think they're going to get it past me."" giggles
""I am very happy for the both of you. God bless your little hearts," growled Jethro, and violently hung up the phone, chucking it against Jenny's wall." oh my god lol lol lol!
| Loads of Randomness chapter 9 . 8/6/2013
Awwwww so sad and emotional until levi pops in of course. At least all Jenny's behaviour now makes sense p
Favourite lines: ""What's he done this time?" she asked no one in particular, starting off.
"He probably tried to build a ladder to the top drawer of his bureau using Legos," Jethro announced.
Kelly paused and glanced back, giving him a disbelieving look.
"That doesn't make sense, Dad," she growled. "Where would he get a dumb ass idea like that?"
Jethro didn't respond right away.
"Er," he began and Kelly glared at him.
"Dad," she reprimanded in exasperation, stalking off as Levi began yelling for her." OMG funny!
""Hmmm," Jenny murmured, taking another sip of her coffee. "Maybe there's something socially wrong with your offspring that induces her to react awkwardly to unfamiliar situations."
"Pardon me if walking into the kitchen to find myself faced with the disturbing reality that my father is, indeed, sleeping with my boss provokes an odd reaction," Kelly said sarcastically, re-entering the kitchen and picking up her abandoned milk carton with a glare." Lols
| Loads of Randomness chapter 8 . 8/6/2013
Lols lols lols LOLS! OMG SO FUNNY
is in a ball laughing my head off
Favourite lines: ""Guess what, team?" Jenny closed her eyes and opened them in defeat. Jethro growled in the back of his throat. "I found Jenny," Tony DiNozzo's amused voice announced." i don't think Jenny and Gibbs are quite as amused as you are Tony
""Jenny and Kelly's dad are having the party," Tony announced loudly." An adult party, DiNozzo. No children allowed
""Why were you taking Jenn-eeee's clothes off, Gunny?" he asked, as Kelly walked into the kitchen. She immediately glared at her colleagues.
"Which one of you told him to ask that?!"
Four people pointed at Tony. He laughed and held up his hands.
"What, I wanted to know too," he tried innocently. He noticed the look on Jenny's face and turned his laughter into harsh coughing." loved that so much
| Loads of Randomness chapter 7 . 8/6/2013
AWWWWWS this chapter had a bit of everytHing in it! love it. Although as a result i'm afraid to say that i cannot choose a favourite line )
Loved all the Jibbs!
| Loads of Randomness chapter 6 . 8/6/2013
Lots and lots of Jibbs! Loved it soooooooooooooooooooooooo much!
Favourite line: ""You have a smart mouth, Jethro," she said, her stunning green eyes capturing his coquettishly.
He reached up and drew his thumb across her bottom lip, quieting her serpentine tongue.
"Yours is sinful," he murmured appreciatively, his head moving close to hers. He slowly moved his hand up her cheek and tangled it back into her hair gently, tilting her head back a little, his hand brushing the inside of her thigh." mmmmm lovely
""Adding to the list of things discovered and or established this weekend," she began to announce dramatically, "You, LeroyJethro, do in fact bite," she held up her injured thumb, and showed him the teeth marks there. "Contrary to what little Kelly assured me."" lols
| Loads of Randomness chapter 5 . 8/6/2013
I really like how Kelly views the team at NCIS. This was a sweet chpater and a funny one. You are a writing genius
"He gave her a graceful mock bow after a moment.
"The damsel wins yet again," he conceded playfully.
"To your seat, knave," Jenny responded, waving her hand loftily towards Tony's desk." lols! BRILLIANT
""Kill them," Levi repeated, baring his teeth.
Jethro solemnly high-fived the kid, effectively making amends for the less than favorable day they'd had together. Kelly gave her father a mini-glare.
"Killing people is wrong, Levi," she said sternly, slowly turning to him.
"Then they don't hurt Mommy!" he interrupted her." love levi
| Loads of Randomness chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
This was amazingly brilliant and creative. Why is Jenny so sad?
Favourite line: ""Because of my finely tuned investigative prowess, I'm well aware of that inconsequential fact, Agent McGee. If I acknowledged him presently, he'd be forced to stop looking at my legs. Therefore, I will ignore him for another five seconds," there was a pointed, five second on the money pause and Jenny slowly lowered the magazine until her startling green eyes peered over the edge." Lols. I like your Jenny
""I see even the mini person understands that his mother is on the histrionic side of obsessive compulsive," she mocked.
"What did you do that drew out the monster?" Jethro asked warily.
"Borrowed a stapler and placed it four inches from where I found it," she answered." definiely an ocd there )
""Nah, it's a you-remind-me-of-my-four-your-old-and-that's-a-lit tle-weird thing," she replied nonchalantly, dropping the iPod and leaning back." pegged tony perfectly, didn't she?
| Loads of Randomness chapter 3 . 8/4/2013
I love Gibbs and Levi together its funny. OOOOHHH JENNY!
Favourite Lines: ""Jesus Christ, you're kidding?" she retorted in mock surprise, "And all these years I've just been throwing myself down them," she was sarcastic, flippant." Love this jenny
He glared at her as he always did, until she broke into a very pretty smile and leaned forward a little, narrowing her eyes and whispering:
"Are we having a staring contest?"
"Were until you blinked," he answered seriously, pointing his index finger towards her left eye." Lols
""Damn good taste, stud," he said." Seriously? To a four year old?
| Loads of Randomness chapter 2 . 8/4/2013
Awwwws so cute. I love Levi!
Favourite Lines: ""Di-no-saur!" he shouted.
"Those are extinct, you know."
"RAWR! BIG TEETH!"
Jethro snorted and set his glass down so he wouldn't spill it.
"I EAT YOU!" insisted Levi, sinking his teeth into Jethro's knee.
"Dammit," swore Jethro, reaching down and snatching Levi's arm. "Son, what did we say about biting?" he asked, glaring down at the kid as he pulled him away from his legs." Lol he's a baby dinosaur! so cute
"You're beating around the bush," he growled.
"Actually, I'm stirring the green beans," she answered" lol, a smart alec Kelly, brilliant!
""The naked lady in Titanic. Which I now think you watched because you're not getting any and—"
"I am done having this conversation. Right now," Jethro growled, turning and stalking away." giggles like a madwoman
I like the way this fic is going )