Reviews for The Pioneer Girl's Story
Jasmyne chapter 2 . 11/24/2016
This chapter was sooooo good I loved it and how it gave a twinkle in wy veins as I knew the suspense was here.
S Danyal Allen chapter 2 . 8/11/2016
That was a cool story, I hope you write more stories like this one.
32e23e22e23 chapter 2 . 7/5/2015
is there a next part

the other mother entered with her hungrily looking face and ate up her live and sent her to a blaclk room to say forever
James Birdsong chapter 2 . 2/8/2010
Neato and stuff.
Archery Shootingstar Bright chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
one more thing: isn't the name of the voice actor herself Hannah?
Archery Shootingstar Bright chapter 2 . 2/3/2010
I love this!

Really well written, vivid, descriptive, dramatic, and sad. You did a great job expressing emotions (especially about the buttons being sewn in- "a flash of regret"...

I like how you slightly referenced to the book, also, about the first encounter with the Other Mother, looking taller and thinner and having red crimson fingernails...

I also really like the introduction in the first chapter. It really grabbed my attention. I like how she was the one to come up with calling the Other Mother a beldam.

Is there more to the story?
A Writer With Mixed Interests chapter 2 . 2/3/2010
Great and creepy story! :d BUT HOW THE HECK DO YOU FRICKIN' POST CHAPTERS ON HERE? AGH! I've been here for almost a year and I STILL don't know how to post chapters! IT KILLS ME! :'(

Well, as all the Russians say...


*Queen Coraline*