Reviews for The Only One
SoVeryAverageMe chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
This is great - I think you do a wonderful job at analyzing and reflecting on the theme of trust between Peter and Neal. It even starts to delve into what makes their relationship so complicated. Nice work!
MarJan53 chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Seeing my all time favorite adorable Neal scene in words makes my day
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
loved how you changed the pov there.

good story!
Crystalzap chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
not bad, but Neal never plays by the rules "stay on my GPS leach, do what he said, and keep him informed on what I was doing with the Kate investigation" especially not the last one
MarJan53 chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
At love the episode and your take on it A Drugged Neal is so adorable with that innocent little boy look on his face makes you just want to take him in your arms an hug him until he squeaks my 3am awake foodis cola with a new book with a good story Idon't need the cola I once made

mistake of starting a bookat 10pm on a Friday and finished some where around 3 so nowif I want to see how it ends I just skip to the end and finish the rest of the book when I have the time especiially with mystery stories when I just need to know if I picked the right suspect
wild-springflower chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
hahaha, i loved this episode! just, that entire moment was great, i mean, Peter walked in and Neal was SINGING, and then he looked up, "Oh hey buddy!" that made me crack up, and then Peter saying they had to get him out of the restraints, "What these?" as Neal just pulls his wrists out of the cuffs, "Never met a lock i couldnt pick..." (sigh) yeah, i have to say that was one of my favorite episodes. and then of course their conversation after that, oh positively heart wrenching. my dad was watching it with me just last night and he was like, "Oh he trusted Kate." and i know that at one point Neal totally trusted Kate, but i think after she left him there is a little part of him that is, idk, wary of getting hurt again. and Mozzie is... Mozzie. "Youre the only one." "The only one what?" "The only person in my life that i trust." ah! (squeals like an insane fangirl... oh wait, i AM one!) anywho, ill stop typing random stuff in this box! fantasic job!
ferryboat George chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Delightful story, though it was a bit disconcerting to suddenly switch POVs, I think, like so many other stories, that ate your scene breaks.
ilovemyboys chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
That was a wonderful story! I love missing scenes and POVS.
Rainchecker chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
I love this. Drugged Neal is the best thing ever. The only problem is that sometimes its hard to tell who is talking, so maybe next time you can clarify by saying Neal's POV or Peter's POV or even split it up into chapters. Thank you for your stories.
Stroma chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
Very good story,
morgo7kc chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
That eppy WAS awesome! and Im paranoid about Neal getting shot too! that is probably Jeff Eastins fault though, considering Neal gets a gun pointed at him like every other episode, (literally i can name 3 right off the top of my head, Book of Hours, All In, the episode with the elephants, the list goes on and on) Anyway, Im getting off topic. This was great, loved it! :D
randomchick51 chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
a little weird scinse Peter breaks his promise to himself in the next episiode by accussing Neal of working with Peirce. I like it anyway.
Mr. Frank chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
I've always believed 3am is the king of writing hours, and this proves it. So much wonderful genius in so little a space! I love it. It got a little confusing when the scenes changed pov as there were no pagebreaks, but it could be that FF ate them [that's what it did to me. 'sigh'] But even without them, again, beautiful work. Two thumbs up and a gold star for you :3
j3nnee chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
I don't think I ever read this. Love it! :D

You got the moment just perfect. *thumbs up!*
cleared account 02 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
*happy fangirl squeals* Marvelous! 'Vital Signs' is one of my favs. too! I am also quite fond of 'the Front Man' and 'Out of the Box' just 'cause I love watching Peter worry about Neal.

Loved it.
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