|Reviews for Tempt Not A Desperate Man|
| 87english chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
*sobs* this just tore at my heart- this is the blackest of all that could happen! It was beautifully written. Good luck in you contest, bb!
| tara sue me chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Oh, dear. See, this is why I've forbidden myself to read the other entries - I just can't stand it.
I thought it very fitting to have Bella trip, after all, everyone know she can't walk and chew gum at the same time. I always wondered how it was she didn't have a problem that one time.
Very heart-breaking and emotional. I like how you used bits and pieces from the book and worked some movie bits in as well. It made it seem all the more real.
Excellent job making me cry. I wish you luck in the contest!
| aurla0 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
| Biddy429 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
True it certainly was tissue time - very romantic and very very sad - I couldnt read the bit where they killed him - I am such a sad individual! Well done - excellent!