Reviews for Fragments
Sheila51 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Very good, very interesting...
BlackGryphon101 chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Poor Snape he was never able to get over her death.
Madame Minuit12 chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
I like it a lot

It is something different :)

Madame Minuit12
iloveshimmer chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Ooh! Great story!

It is thought-provoking and utterly fascinating. This is such an intimate and personal perspective on Severus Snape. Even though he isn't physically there, you can feel his presence so strongly, it's almost smothering. You conveyed so much passion and desolation with so little! You captured his complexity and defined him in such a vivid, heartbreaking way! This story is a gem.

I liked how Harry realized the meaning behind each item, that these things meant so such to a broken-hearted man. It's sad that even in death, Snape misjudges Harry and mistakenly assumes that Harry is as simple minded as James. If Snape actually looked, he would see that he and Harry are less different than he thinks...

Ron's all-around cluelessness is funny (and in character). I can easily see him fooling around with all the grotesque things and being scolded by Hermione.

I love it.
Melora chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
For further writing, you may be interested in this site:

w w w . sapientimagic . com (without the spaces)

It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student