Reviews for Breathing underwater
LaverylK chapter 23 . 2/7
Loved it but I just wish it was a little longer maybe.
milagglad chapter 23 . 9/19/2014
Maravilloso, habrĂ¡ secuela?
Guest chapter 11 . 6/3/2013
darkangel0212 chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
good job on your stories
GallagherGirl537 chapter 23 . 11/16/2010
this was interesting i like how you changed edward
TheAnnakpick chapter 23 . 8/30/2010
This story was really creative, im impressed, awesome job!:)
aderrett chapter 23 . 8/29/2010
wow this is a very powerful story, you did a great job writing it
bleach number 1 fan chapter 23 . 8/5/2010
very nice fic i realy enjoyed reading it i liked how u killed edward off lol nice work and i cant w8t to see more of your wrighting :D
Lizdacious chapter 23 . 8/2/2010
Can I just say this: don't ever, ever doubt your writing skills. Even though English was not your first language, I must say you know it better than some people on here. You are an amazing writer, and convey everything so amazingly. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story, and I am excited to read the rest of your stories. I'm also looking forward to future writings by you. Thank you for bringing me enjoyment with your story!
riverkirby chapter 23 . 7/6/2010
wow...just wow
Divided Heart chapter 10 . 7/4/2010
omfg lol

ugh i realy thought he was gonna rape alice! now that would be a surprise but im glad he did not
liberal4peace chapter 23 . 6/20/2010
Hmm... Kinda weird ending, but good!
Jou Valentine chapter 23 . 6/17/2010
So Edward ended up as a dead asshole,and Jacob ended up as a hero huh? Yup,you definitely write good fiction,XD
kimmie1995 chapter 23 . 6/8/2010
awesome story
minako366 chapter 23 . 4/18/2010
awesome. Ending seemed to come out of nowhere, but no worries, it was still good ;) and my eyesight zeroed in on the word 'sequel.' Yes please? *grins*
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