Reviews for Who Are You?
fireopalring chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
That was so hot! I loved how he kept asking her who she was until she said "i'm yours". Please consider extending this into a longer story.
Nissa-Cullen chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
It was very good. You did well on it. i wouldn't mind reading more.
Itsgrowin chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
Now that was a hot hot Darksper. By the end of the story I was hyperventilating.:) I wanted to read more, so please think about it.
RedSoleSista chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Wow. I feel a little warm. LOL I'm intrigued, I hope you will extend this into a full story.
TillITryIllNeverKnow chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
steamy, hot, and even a little mysterious, that's what I think. In other words, damn! I loved it!
slytheringrl17 chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
i like it
Jasper's temptress chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Wow, i'd so wanna read more of this.
roon0 chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Hot hot hot. Any chance of more?
Jasper's-Darlin chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Oh my God. My face is on fire right now. Is it hot in here? Wow! Your story is intriguing and hott! I implore you to continue the story. And I can tell just how much you don't like Edward from the 'controlling, whiny bastard' thing you wrote. That is funny. But again the story is awesome and I beg you to continue the story. Thanks!
Lola.Loves.Me chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
WOW that was amazing

i seriously think you should consider extending it

let me know if you are please

i love dark jasper

lola x
cheshirekat516 chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
I liked your story. Any possibility of it continuing?
CarminMoon chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
That was very interesting. A lone cowboy, hunting a not-so-virginal vixen.

Nicely done!
GemmaLisax chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
wow, very good. Your jasper was so deliciously hot! loved it.
MissingDublin chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Man who wouldn't love a dark, dominant Jasper? I know I would. He's hot!
mom4ver2004 chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
great one shot
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