Reviews for Everyone Leaves
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
This made me cry
don'ttrysohardtosaygoodbye chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
*cries* ahhh! :( beautiful. do they reunite in heaven?
BRROASTSTER chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
wow that sad
MysticNyx06 chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
love it
Dopeshieet chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
omg thats so sad,. but i like it in a way. awesome
katstooldforthis chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
WOW my sister died in her sleep like that...same thing my bro in law went and made her breakfast, it was their anniversary but she just didn't wake up. Really really sad for me reading this.

You wrote it great.
Atlaxxxx chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Oh my. I was actually crying. That was great :] Sad as hell ending, but it was sweet and everything :] I loved it :]

And I didn't think of Titanic at all when I read the bridge scene. Okay, well maybe just a tad, but only because of the whole leaning over with him behind her thing. That was it. Everything else was amazing :]
borntodanceninefour chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
This was so sad. ): Great idea, really creative! I thought maybe they were in the clear at first, but then they both ended up dying.

Really, really nice job with this.

Good luck!
SoftGMR chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
God... That was sad...

Beautiful, but sad...

You left me crying...
vamp.ladybug chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Oh Wow, I didn't think I would like a one shot to where Edward dies ever but this was breath taking. You have my vote that is for sure.
Rinou chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Nice one...If I may use "nice"...obviously it's sad, but, well, what I meant was that it was well written.

I like the story line, or whatever it's called...the chronology, if you prefered...

Anyway, the point is that I appreciated your story :)
twinkletash chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
this is so powerfull

i'm sat here crying after finishing it