Reviews for Coping With Life
TamsinBailey chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
I think you have done very well indeed.

The first sentence is a grabber, and much better than the average introduction. Beyond a good beginning, what I particularly like is the idea of Ziva feeling adrift. The show seems to have completely dropped the Ziva-held-captive story line, and fics like yours do a great job of filling the gap, hinting at long term repercussions. The Tony, Ziva interaction is also quite good, showing they care about each other, with out being mawkish. A rare balance!

Well plotted, with believable character interaction. Can't ask for much more. My only quibble (and it is a quibble) is that aircraft carriers do not rock. Unless there is a storm. A really, really big one. And the beds are called racks, instead of bunks. Specifically 'coffin racks', for obvious reasons.

Please keep writing NCIS fics. I'd love to read more.

Cheers,

Tam
Scosh81 chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
This was awesome!
Swingflip chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Supercute! lol. The characters are great!
lacrevette35 chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Love it! The end me have a big smile, Tony is really funny!

lacrevette35
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
haha this was perfect! every thing about it just screamed perfection - the nightmare, the conversation, the kiss, the holding hands, the sunrise, and the final two lines. very cute without being overly fluffy. i really enjoyed it! you shouldn't have been nervous at all. you've got talent, don't let go of that...ever.
tonyfan31970 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Wow, all I can say is, I love it! Hope you write some more NCIS Fic!
Griever11 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Magnificent. Truly poetic and beautiful. Thanks for this.
AzulVerde chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Really LOVE IT..! :)
Silvergrass chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
exquisite.
Betherzz chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
what a great little story, gotta say i did not see where it was going to end up but its a great ending :) that little kiss and then gibbs showing up rofl only gibbs would know exactally where they would be. just glad it ended with a bit of laughter
gsr4ever chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
This was really great. Nice job
eilatan78 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Loved it...
Maror chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
This was beautiful. A really nice look at both the characters and their relationship. Realistic and with just the right hint of sweetness. Excellent characterization all 'round. Love this so much.

(Tiny issue: if someone the doc didn't know showed up at sick bay, it would not take long at all to find out who she was. No one is unknown on a ship, even one with a crew of that size.)
Ink On Paper chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Yeah, about that last line? I'm still smiling. I can't decide which line is my favorite -so I will settle for all of the above. This was ingenious! And very well executed.
DoveFeathersAndSnowFlurries chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
soo awesome! lik i hope this happens for real! and you got the characters perfectly! and i love the end line!
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