Reviews for Coping With Life
TamsinBailey chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
I think you have done very well indeed.

The first sentence is a grabber, and much better than the average introduction. Beyond a good beginning, what I particularly like is the idea of Ziva feeling adrift. The show seems to have completely dropped the Ziva-held-captive story line, and fics like yours do a great job of filling the gap, hinting at long term repercussions. The Tony, Ziva interaction is also quite good, showing they care about each other, with out being mawkish. A rare balance!

Well plotted, with believable character interaction. Can't ask for much more. My only quibble (and it is a quibble) is that aircraft carriers do not rock. Unless there is a storm. A really, really big one. And the beds are called racks, instead of bunks. Specifically 'coffin racks', for obvious reasons.

Please keep writing NCIS fics. I'd love to read more.


Scosh81 chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
This was awesome!
Swingflip chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Supercute! lol. The characters are great!
lacrevette35 chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Love it! The end me have a big smile, Tony is really funny!

xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
haha this was perfect! every thing about it just screamed perfection - the nightmare, the conversation, the kiss, the holding hands, the sunrise, and the final two lines. very cute without being overly fluffy. i really enjoyed it! you shouldn't have been nervous at all. you've got talent, don't let go of that...ever.
tonyfan31970 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Wow, all I can say is, I love it! Hope you write some more NCIS Fic!
Griever11 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Magnificent. Truly poetic and beautiful. Thanks for this.
AzulVerde chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Really LOVE IT..! :)
Silvergrass chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Betherzz chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
what a great little story, gotta say i did not see where it was going to end up but its a great ending :) that little kiss and then gibbs showing up rofl only gibbs would know exactally where they would be. just glad it ended with a bit of laughter
gsr4ever chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
This was really great. Nice job
eilatan78 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Loved it...
Maror chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
This was beautiful. A really nice look at both the characters and their relationship. Realistic and with just the right hint of sweetness. Excellent characterization all 'round. Love this so much.

(Tiny issue: if someone the doc didn't know showed up at sick bay, it would not take long at all to find out who she was. No one is unknown on a ship, even one with a crew of that size.)
Ink On Paper chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Yeah, about that last line? I'm still smiling. I can't decide which line is my favorite -so I will settle for all of the above. This was ingenious! And very well executed.
DoveFeathersAndSnowFlurries chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
soo awesome! lik i hope this happens for real! and you got the characters perfectly! and i love the end line!
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