|Reviews for HalfBreed: Unwanted|
| Lucyole chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
wow that was one hell of a crazy interesting cool story i ever read
really good work
| Immortalis Cruor Elf chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
awwwww it over! come on make another story about him! plzzzzzzz!
| MechaUltimaZero chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Wow, now that's an interesting take on Apocalymon. Now I've seen him as a total bastard (this fic) AND portrayed as a victim (see final chapter of "The Silver Egg"). An overall excellent fic, and although I understand you don't plan to continue it, I do wish to know how the story ends. By the way, just what exactly does Hakumei actually mean?
| Elegon chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
Tell me! Tell me! If you don't, my digimon partner, Zenmon, will attack!
| Hathis chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Very interesting. Not exactly my favorite genre, but great writing all the same. I particularly enjoyed the way you made Hakumei realize his destiny: a great spin on an old trope (I'm going to go crazy with that word). I feel the need to urge you to proofread however. There were a lot of spelling mistakes and, while it didn't take away from the story overall, you might draw unnecessary criticism for something that can be taken care of so easily.
| Belka Chernavka chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Epic. Truly epic. Kirax just stole first place in my list of favorite OCs. That was awesome! I wish you could write moreabout him.
| 7MukuroRealm7 chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
How dark. The sad thing is, if he had gone, Kari, being the kind-hearted person she is, probably would have excepted him. I like how you said Kari was married, but it could have been TK, Davis, or someone else. Good elusion. Too bad we've seen the end of Kirax. Until next time,
| Kaito Lune chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
That was amazing and sad at the same time! I've never read Footsteps of Destiny but because of this, I think I just might pic this up. Poor kid. :(
| Broken Angel01 chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
I have to say that was pretty awesome! And so creepy in some spots I got shivers. I felt so bad for poor little Hakumei! I'm definitely adding this to my favorites list and I hope you continue writing digimon fanfiction!