Reviews for Trauma
tmntlover2013 chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Great job on the story, I liked it alot, it was reealy sad
:(, keep up the great work and keep on writing.
AmberNightshade chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
um just because i'm curious what exsactly happened you should write a sequel and should be like...(ya know those movies that start at the end then go al the way to the beggining then wrap it all up ) ... that ... nya like that
chao-friend chapter 1 . 4/15/2010 You sure like to kill Leo, don't you? Oh, well. I like to hurt Karai. Guess we all have our own tastes *shrugs and walks away, hands in pockets*
AlyssaFelixa chapter 1 . 2/4/2010

PS Ever heard of paragraphing?
raphfreak chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
this was very short and didn't make much sense to be honest... who's dead? and how?

there are lots of gaps in this story that maybe you could fill in with a chapter two? or a sequel?