Reviews for Heat
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2016
Well that was interesting but funny continue please
HarukaTsukinoTenoh chapter 1 . 10/5/2015
heheh, I love the stories where Natsu always interrupts them in some way and Erza chases after him completely pissed off, lol
KTlovesmoney chapter 1 . 9/16/2015
I Give This Lemon A 82/100
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
So freakin sexy!
KlausMikelson chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
you should either continue the story or make a sequal, it was very good
erza chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
i want more sex from lucy
Weiss Schneezed chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
This was great :)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
That was awesome loved when gray said so u joined me
Firediva0 chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
This was reallt good! I liked it!
woww chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
This changes fairytale huh
Bloody Amethyst chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
this story was good and i love the ending xD
kmasmdymflp chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
where would anyone be without these idiots!? lmao, great story! hope you make some more, I really enjoyed your work!
cabby2299 chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
That was a great little story. I'll have to check out some of your other work. Thanks for sharing.
rulanpooh16 chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
I almost died laughing when Erza attacked Natsu.!. XD Really loved this story, it was hot, yet humorous. ;)
Siera-Knightwalker chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
i'm not someone who usully reads this kinda stuff but this was definately arousing and fun.. i was laughing like a mad person when natsu barged in.. that was fun.. haha.. i knew one day natsu would get killed because of his rashness..
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