Reviews for The Chess King
Ille Somnia chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Hi there! I just read this story, and it was really good, honestly. I like how you made Luffy and Usopp play chess; I think it suits them, actually. :D I've been looking for a beta reader, lately, and I couldn't help but notice that you've got a profile to be one. I tried to PM you, but since your PMing is turned off, I wasn't able to contact you, and I supposed that this would be the best way to do it then. Do you think you could beta my story for me, please? It's a One Piece one (hence the reason I am reviewing on one of your One Piece fanfics), and, well... It takes place after the Straw Hat Crew, with my OC, Ferris. I would really appreciate if you could check it out and tell me if you'll help me or not. Thank you!
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
#clacked
#burst out laugh

XDDD

LUFFY IS AWESOME!

He Is King! Lol
Queen1Shadows chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Nobody's telling you in the reviews but its ROOK not brook (that's the the singing skeleton) other than that its a very cool one-shot and it would be awesome if you expanded upon this idea maybe making and fanfiction where Luffy still has his devil fruit powers but also is a strategist planning everything out through the use of a chess board. Just an idea.
Peanutcat12 chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Aww this so cute and sweet :D
Lyneel chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
amazing idea, wonderful story :D
Alexsasha chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Whoa, I can totally picture Luffy playing this! He may be an idiot, but he has his wise moments. I don't know how to play chess either, but this sounds pretty ok.
White Camel chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Awwwwwww, that's so sweet. :] xxx
Ano Crazy Adventurer chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Awesome! Luffy should be called 'The Unexpected Genius'! Nice one! See you again! ;D!
Nekoi Kurona chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Nice, Luffy really is the King And Luffy really can win without making sacrifices; he got them all into Enies Lobby and out.
AlcoholicIntrovert chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
Hehe! This is funny and adorable!

I love how Luffy compares him crew to the chess pieces, and how Zoro is the "Queen" :) So cute! :)
Toriano.Flacko chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
hmmm... goes outside of the normal boundaries of the 'who is who again?'(although it does leave recent crew members out(Re: just reread the author's note, nevermind that although I could have just erased that)) and... well, it works. would say "awww, so kawaii" but... no. just... ehhh... it's cool. something to think about sometimes.

LATER!
Wonijs chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Cool story
just anie6142 chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
just one word to describe this fic...Amazing.
SilverStream101 chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Luffy pawns XD Excellent! I loved it! :)
Bakachan chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Gaw! What a sweet fic! I loved it! o Luffy at the end was awesome; apparently he's really good at chess! :D
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