I am so curious to find out if Victoria just had some extra gift that could help her mind control Jessica that you decided to give her, or is it that the dazzling thing that some authors utilize was stronger here in your fic to where they could literally mind control a person. Because without either of those things, how in the world was Jessica able to be controlled like that?

One threat down, one to go. I am curious to find out what exactly is going to happen to Jessica, because how do you punish somebody for something thatsupernatural being did? Like, what would be the excuse there? But she’s gotta be punished somehow. I wondered in my mind as I was reading it what exactly could possibly have gotten Jessica to agree to do that but I’m thinking maybe that Victoria offered her immortality? Too bad that bitch would be unlikely to keep her word and Jessica would likely have ended up another hanging corpse.

Why do I have a feeling that whatever happened while Bella was apart from Jake had something to do with Lauren and Jessica?

I’m glad she got away, i bet she tapped into the pack strength without realizing it. But damn that was too close.

I wouldn’t say unoriginal, it being a Cullen was just an expectation because that’s usually what happens. They show up at the most inopportune times because they’re assholes. And honestly, I think it should be a compliment. The fact that you were able to surprise us readers so easily, I definitely wouldn’t of expected one of the Volturi and I’m willing to bet that the girl was Jane. Which is bad, because now she’s running back to daddy dearest to tell him all about little Bella and the fact that she’s a omega. I’m willing to bet that learning that Bella is an Omega on top of her being a shield is probably going to be exactly what brings the Volturi and causes Bella‘s dream to come to fruition. Fucking Edward.

Oooooo, who is this? My money is on Victoria, which would be really weird, Edward, or Alice

Ha, I knew it! I knew she was blocking the imprint somehow. As for Leah, i get she’s hurting, i just hope now that she’ll let them help her. Rock bottom is as low as you can go, she can only go up from here.

I think they actually imprinted, but something Emily said made me wonder…is it possible her shield is blocking the imprint? And maybe it’s because her heart is still fractured and her mind is trying to protect her? Because everything that they’re doing screams imprint. I also noticed that while they should feel compelled to tell her things like they said in the meeting, he didn’t seem compelled to say anything to her down on the beach, despite her telling him to just spit it out. So I wonder, is the compulsion only when it has to do with the pack? Because that would be less invasive for the boys.

I’m curious what it means for her to bond to Sam when he’s not the true alpha, like what would happen when Jake decides to take his position? I’m also wondering if maybe the reason Jake is so bonded to Bella now, as if it is an imprint, possibly because he’s the true alpha and she’s the omega. The bond is supposed between the two of them, but he’s not Alpha right now, so is it maybe destiny trying to push them together?

Ooooooo, things are getting reeeeeal interesting now.

I wonder if his “and I never will” is because he’s determined that he’ll never imprint or is it because he actually knows he’ll never imprint. Because the way those two are acting, and what Bella keeps describing, I swear it sounds like an imprint. And yay for first kisses and I absolutely love Emily. I could totally picture her cast-iron skillet in her hand, wacking naughty werewolves over the head because they’re being an asshats to somebody.

Whew, this one is definitely already interesting! So many questions! How did she get to the meadow? Why does this feel like an imprint but not an imprint? And how mad will the pack and Sam be with what just happened? I think I’m most impressed with Jake phasing back so seamlessly while she was still clinging to him. Lol.

So good!

Que linda historia

I really enjoyed most your story, your very talented
but I have no love for the Cullens and Bella's love for them
is wrong and unnatural, especially after the way they left her
just when they had put her life in danger.
Edward left her in the woods to die, she should have no love or loyalty
to those bloodsucking leeches.
Yeah, I am upset with Bella and have a deep seated dislike for the Cullens
They're master manipulators.