Yay! Great job! I LOVE that it looks like you are going to add The omega aspect from Briggs books. I love those. PERFECT idea! I really can't wait to see how this plays out. Cool to give Bella (?) omega qualities - something cool to do instead of just getting over her issues! (ha ha)

Also love that you are picking up where Jake is just starting to phase. This time period has so much fodder for deep emotional and angst-"coming to terms with what you really are" space. Use it and spin us an awesome tale! You are well on your way! Iam loving this premise - brilliant really.

Ps I still wanna know how she got in the field ;-)

awesome job and good solid writing with minimal typos. Brava!

great story! cant wait to find out what happens next so plz update soon!

Good beginning !

Please hurry up with next chapter.

Interesting story. I am curious to see where it will go. It seems like a recap of New Moon with a twist.

I refuse to use my Facebook account for various reasons lol, but you can message me on MSN Messenger Mizz_Meme06 or email me. Whichever floats your boat if you want to talk.

WOW! I love this story so far and I might add u on Facebook... but I don't go on there much lol! Please update soon!