Reviews for Trip to Vegas |
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![]() ![]() ![]() you stoll the first part from an already written story or the opposite i don't remember and i don't understand a thing from what just happenrd |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWWWW! The end is soooooo cute! I love it! Also good song choice. You did a great job at tying the movie and the story together with things like Sister Cynthia Knickerbocker and the sugarless gum. I was umming and aring about writing a review - not that you story wasn't worth my time (because I really do love the story) but just because I was in a rush. The ending changed my mind though and I made time to come back and review the end is just so cute! I am so adding this story to my favourites. Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() Confused :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was so good i loved the moovie zombieland and i loved this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an awesome peice.I loved the movie and it would have been coolif there was ascene like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! You have great spelling and grammar, and I get a sense of the characters. Keep on writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad. Chapter are short. But sweet. Tryed to read ch.12 But i'll have to do later. Some kind of technical problem with the site. Lookng forwards to the next chapters and your other storys. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was pretty darn good |
![]() ![]() i liked this fic, but thought it was kind of confusing at parts |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god i loved it! I wish it wasnt finshed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god... This is amazing! You have to add more chapters to this! |
![]() ![]() Your story rocks my socks and I'm so happy that you update so regularly. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool, keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like this. i think you should update. the interaction between columbus and wichita seems real. like it would be in the movie. and the backstory about wichita and Little rock makes sense in a way too. update soon yeah? -K.A.L |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story... You shud write more lol |