Reviews for Unbecoming
SerenityWritesSlash chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Pfft, poor Joey! Well done, keep up the good work.
JuJu-chan the Vampire chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Niiiice :D
Jonouchi Katsuya chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
This definitely fits dub-canon characterization. Personally, I don't like the idea of Jonouchi drinking, but this is "Joey" so it is fine.

You said "mutt" a lot.

Some parts of this were really really funny or really stood out. Kaiba in the awkward position hanging on to the sink. "You missed" was particularly cute. "Would this be your best performance?" was my favorite line.
Muffin'sback chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Well... This should have a sequel!
MoonlightSkye chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
XD What a great ending! I wasn't expecting it. 3 I laughed alot and smiled alot so, it was very good!
Sentiment for Lost Creatures chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
really good!

Now I think you should expand on the 'morning after'! :D
mesmerized67levender chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
The strongest point of this one-shot is the fact that Joey and Kaiba are not out of character. I wouldn’t it have thought possible for such a pairing to work and Kaiba still preserve his arrogant attitude while Joey his buffoonish one; the ‘being drunk’ excuse was an ingenious catalyst. Moreover, the witty remarks spiced up the whole scene. Quite impressive!
AyaKagami chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
*recovers from the laughter that resulted in the end*

For someone that is not a fan of puppyshipping, this was very well done. It ended quite humorously and I think that you did a great job.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
I mean...

Seto needs to tell joey he DIDN'T just lose his virginity!

And this is just a great and wonderful fic.


I'm very happy.

Please write a 2nd!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2010

'You missed!'

That was funny.

Anyway, you should write a second.

I wonder what will happen in the future!

Seto needs to tell joey he did just lose his verginity!