Reviews for A Tear Stained Photograph
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
Oh wow, that the last thing I expected them to die from. This is incredibly sad. Probably the saddest fanfic I've ever read. God, I'm tearing up writing this review to you
Kyosuke Nanbu chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
This is one of those rare times when a tear escaped my eyes... Great story
dingcs chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Actually, I prefer a glass of apple juice please. Heh. _ Anyway this was so wrong, the beginning I mean. How could you Takuya? That's violating the Takumi guidebook! How dare you break Zoe's heart by dating some Desiree chick. (Though I got to say, Desiree is a cool name. Haha)

This was so sad, poor Zoe. But it got better towards the end, at least they're somewhat together...dead... oh who cares it still counts. But can you seriously die from staying inside a car too long? Damn, I won't look at cars the same ever again. lol.

Sad but great one-shot! I like it. I also like the song you chose. My Immortal was my favorite song maybe two years ago...? No maybe, whenever that movie Daredevil came out. Oh wait, no that was Bring Me to Life... meh whatever, same band. Good job! :D

P.S. Kouichi such a creeper with his camera o_o LOL!
lanski12 chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Man that was sad but good at the same time bu anyway good chapter
utsukushii04 chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
That was such a great story! I was so mad at takuya! Little idiot! And after Koji had called Zoe telling her that Takuya was going to call her I was also tense! The suspense, I guess was killing me! I almost cried at the end!

But again, GREAT story! I loved it (even if they did die)!
hEaRtBrEaKeR19 chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
OMG! I love this song... My Immortal by Evenescence... SWEET! _

I love it... I like this songfic... You're really good at this one... Even it's a sad story but still, it makes me cry T_T... But I oh-so love it _... WE!

Anyways, hope you can make another songfic, especially when it's Evenescence...

Bye _
Ambiekinz chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Aww, that was an epically sweet takumi story...Not to mention sad too. I was sort of wondering how they died, but then you said carbon monoxide and I was like "Carbon monoxide Poison. Poison Death...OHH!" lol
GRX3m0m chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Yeah, that was a LONG one-shot. I liked it and I didn't fall asleep(Althought I read it on 1:00 o clock :D). It was really romantic...
Blacker Side of the Shadows chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
heheh, emo writing. time for Captain Jack Morgan to take a stand!

*Strikes a captain Jack Morgan pose.
Royal Court Jester chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
give me that Jack Daniels please

I felt like Zoe or Takuya so many times...good story Ash

I don't know what else to say, this morning isn't the best in the week for me

I should go now, see ya later Ash