|Reviews for Life after Max|
| Peacock angel chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
| Gemsta rox chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
a good story but you need to proof read lol. Nevertheless I enjoyed it and look forward to there being more.
P.S. If you could review either my fanfiction about Gingersnaps or my fanfiction for The Chocolate Box Girls series or both it would be a great help to me.
| Stellala13 chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
I like the story line. I like the fact that you wrote an FF about this book. But Imma be nit-picky for a sec.
1)I don't think it makes much sense because of the errors on grammar.
2)Your spelling's inconsistant to the point of fault.
3)You don't seem to punctuate anything.
Otherwise, it is fine. The problem I have, and the reason I reviewed this way, is because I think the grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes are extremely distracting.
I'm kinda trying to help you, so don't take this the wrong way, please. :-)
I like that last line.
| strawberry-sunset194 chapter 1 . 2/17/2010