|Reviews for My Name Is B|
| morning.chickenhead chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Very poignant ending!
| teacupz chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
wow. that was really nice. I liked the idea. it looked a bit similiar with Daniel's case but it was still interesting. after all, they did die in the same way, right? ;) great idea!
also amazing vocabulary. wow, you sure know a lot of hard words. the way you describe things was great too. and I loved when you mentioned Bill watching the moon and said his name.
these lines: There'd been…eyes? Yes. Yes, he'd looked into someone's eyes.
I think it might give more effects if you put the second sentence in a new line and then the third sentence in the line below it.
Yes, he'd looked into someone's eyes.
also these lines: And he'd heard something. A name. His name.
I think it might also give effects if you put 'his name' in a new line. well, only my opinion. :/ sorry if I am wrong.
overall, a really interesting story. I wish to see the next chapter. keep continue!
| blueflower1594 chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
This would actually be an interesting ending to the game. Good work!