Reviews for BB's First Fight
yunadustrial.twifan chapter 4 . 6/18/2011
this was awsome. i like the ending
Thessilian chapter 4 . 2/24/2010
haha funny :)
Thessilian chapter 2 . 2/24/2010
Love the dialogue and how it fits the action!
Thessilian chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Good title :) I like how you keep it through the chapter.
UnderxConstruction chapter 4 . 2/9/2010
Ahah, funny! It sure felt like a fight while scribbling numbers on that stupid math test, right? Good job! Love the quotation... Alfieri?
UnderxConstruction chapter 2 . 2/5/2010
Ouch, my balls! Good job, keep going!
UnderxConstruction chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Hehe, poor middle aged woman...good idea, the glasses! Reminds me of Bergan :-)