|Reviews for The Red Wake AKA Surrender the Booty|
| Empy08 chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
o thats a fun story. please continue :D
| TwiDi chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
You should definitely continue this ;) I can't wait to read more :D
| ColourmeCullen chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
God I hope you continue this! lmao
My fav. line? "I guess I shall just have to plunder you myself."
| pixiekat7 chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Dayum! 'Nuff said. ;-)
| Kimberlesk chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
YES! Someone finally writes Pirateward! Thank you! I read it and me likey ALOT - Capt. taking his wench whenever he pleases is HOT! Please continue!
| orion chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Please do! this is not enough...do it please!
| cshorte chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Love it! Hope you continue!
| Litany Gone chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
I realy like it
I hope this OS will be a story soon
| lambcullen chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
I'm signing Bette Midler dollie!
| Donut Magnet chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Holy crapola, I want on that boat! But only if redrumward promises to use the rope ;)
| snjez chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
you totally should extend it! that was awesome!
| LMMinc chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Please keep going, I'm already hooked!
| ladyeire3 chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
I will hound you and follow you to the widest, deepest depths of the sea until you finish this mofo! HOLYMOTHEROFSHIZ! I can't believe you were all worried about this pet!* On to the review:
You captured the period & the perspective of a naive young lady superbly. Case in point..."A girl of my gentle breeding was not used to taking stock of a gentleman, and certainly not that particular part of anatomy from this angle." & "Surely all of that was not going to fit inside me." I know I probably wasn't meant to laugh but I did, ngl!
EPOV was excellent too. You got the feeling he really is a total badass which is good when your a pirate and people wanna kill you. Jasper playing a fiddle? .NOW. *thud* It just seems so right.
Your knowledge of the ship, clothing, language was so wonderful. The lemons were intense in both sexiness but also that fear vs. lust and anger vs. control. I melted and so did my drawers. You owe me $20 for new panties by the way;)
I think thats all I can say without getting totally inappropriate but I may have muttered something about having your children in the future and offering myself up to Rumward and the crew for a bit of folly on the high seas *wink* if you finish this story. Just say'n!
Love you, love the fic, sending a long distance high five for a job VERY well done!
| haiti01 chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
love the idea! please continue... this is going to be so fun!
| CkKollman chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
You should definitely keep this going...it was awesome!