|Reviews for Not all that Glitters|
| Julie U chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
Don't you hate it when your head gets caught in your placenta?
| Neemo chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
. Naturally you find spanking at 18 funny so of course you wrote crud like thjs
| Adoxagraphy.Angelus chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
This is good. But you messed up on the name. On the top you put it right, but on the name you put 'Not all that glitters is not gold.' But you did really well to put the reader in that situation, because you were aiming to get us to feel Mary Anne's emotion by saying you. Great job!