|Reviews for Spontaneous Me|
| sherry15 chapter 8 . 12/20/2011
Just discovered your story! It's really good. I hope you update soon!
| lste chapter 8 . 12/6/2011
PLEASE! If you don't finish this story I really want to know her secret! o_O it'll drive me mad if you never finish and I never know why she ran off!
| Seiya-Girl chapter 8 . 12/3/2011
OMG OMG OMG PLEASE CONTINUE! LOL why did you stop? Your writing style is amazing, i really felt like I was Pan at times xD. I cried when she felt like it, i laughed at that little scene in this chapter with the park bench hahaha sounds really stupid i know .. But keep it up and update soon! XX
| justme467 chapter 8 . 11/27/2011
Wow. I had given up on DBZ fanfic a long time ago. But, after reading this AMAZING story I found it worthwhile to sign in and leave you a verified review because that's how much I enjoyed and value your story. Amazing. Simply amazing. I really do hope you continue this and update soon. After reading some of the other reviews I gather that this story was idle for a while. I hope you pick it up and continue updating with amazing chapters like this. I really want to know why she left! I also like the pace your going at. I'm being impatient and wanting them to make up already and kick marron out of the scene but then that kinda spoils it yah know. Anyways, I hope to see more updates from you and to finish this story! Thanks!
| trunksgf96 chapter 7 . 11/26/2011
OK so i'm a new reader lol. My friend told me about this story and to read it so i did...and it is AMAZING!
I love it it has enough drama, but so much romance omg it's amazing. I'm more curious about why Pan left. I mean who would want to leave any one like trunks...it's nonsense lol
| june chapter 8 . 11/4/2011
I love this story! and the dream was very well written :)
| Little Miss Z chapter 8 . 11/3/2011
okay im quite a picky reader
sometimes i story alert things just cause they may have potential or they made me laugh or something stupid, so when a story alert appears in my inbox i don't get too excites about
except when its this one
this story is by far the one i look most forward to, its my favourite pairing written so beautifully, its also funny, clever, cute, hot, creative and suspenseful
i am so glad you continued to write it
| Celebrien chapter 8 . 11/2/2011
So glad to see a new chapter for this! I really enjoy the way you capture Pan's emotions, and how complex they are. The dream she had threw me off so badly until it was revealed that she was just dreaming! Hahaha
| Loregar chapter 8 . 11/2/2011
Welcome back! I thought you decided not to continue this fic. Hope you update soon, I missed it :)
| Himawari 19 chapter 8 . 11/1/2011
Oh my gosh that scene was HOT! And all a dream!
I think I know why she left, how heartbreaking ;(
| Himawari 19 chapter 7 . 11/1/2011
Trunks deal in the last chapter made me tear up! I haven't read this story in a while so I had to piece some things together as I went. I love it it's so sweet seeing them reconnect.
| Cosmic-lover chapter 8 . 11/1/2011
Another wonderful chapter! It was definitely interesting :) I was really happy that you've update. Nice work
| hot4dbz chapter 8 . 11/1/2011
You dont need 2 apologise...life is life...thats all there is 2 it. Abt the chap. I enjoyed. I thought it was hilarious the way that pan almost had sex w/ trunks in the park...but I hope she doesnt become desperate... Way 2 mak a bad day worse uub. Normally I lik him but in this story he acts lik hes high and mighty lik, pan cant liv with out him...reality chech...pan is a saiyan and cood kick his butt 2 mars and bac! I wood pay 2 see that! Plz update soon Im not mad that it took longer 2 update last time bh ut when u do cood u put a summary of the previous chaps events the beggi bn ing of the chap? I 4got wat was goin on in the story...sorry... _
| famoso chapter 8 . 11/1/2011
Im so glad you're back this were my favorite story before you left, and now I get to find out why Pan left. Could it have have something to do with that nightmare she was having did Pan lose a child and sont know how to tell Trunks about it, thats the only thing I can think of that would make her leave.
Well welcome back will be waiting next chapter.
| howlin4you chapter 7 . 10/14/2011
this is really a fantastic story! i usually don't ready the GT type fics or Pan/Trunks ones, but i honestly love this! i hope you update soon! i wanna know why Pan left, what is the reason? you're killing me over here! lol