Reviews for Spontaneous Me
dark m00n angel chapter 8 . 7/16/2012
This is a great story I think that I have a clue about why she left...but I'm not sure pls update soon...
Elyseexp chapter 8 . 3/21/2012
Oh thank the good lord! I thought you were never coming back, and I have been reading just about ever pan and trunks story and this one is still my favorite, no one has the flare that you do.
Sophie5995 chapter 8 . 2/27/2012
Please update! I can't get enough of this fic it's so good! 3

sherry15 chapter 8 . 12/20/2011
Just discovered your story! It's really good. I hope you update soon!
lste chapter 8 . 12/6/2011
PLEASE! If you don't finish this story I really want to know her secret! o_O it'll drive me mad if you never finish and I never know why she ran off!
Seiya-Girl chapter 8 . 12/3/2011
OMG OMG OMG PLEASE CONTINUE! LOL why did you stop? Your writing style is amazing, i really felt like I was Pan at times xD. I cried when she felt like it, i laughed at that little scene in this chapter with the park bench hahaha sounds really stupid i know .. But keep it up and update soon! XX
justme467 chapter 8 . 11/27/2011
Wow. I had given up on DBZ fanfic a long time ago. But, after reading this AMAZING story I found it worthwhile to sign in and leave you a verified review because that's how much I enjoyed and value your story. Amazing. Simply amazing. I really do hope you continue this and update soon. After reading some of the other reviews I gather that this story was idle for a while. I hope you pick it up and continue updating with amazing chapters like this. I really want to know why she left! I also like the pace your going at. I'm being impatient and wanting them to make up already and kick marron out of the scene but then that kinda spoils it yah know. Anyways, I hope to see more updates from you and to finish this story! Thanks!
Savitron5 chapter 7 . 11/26/2011
OK so i'm a new reader lol. My friend told me about this story and to read it so i did...and it is AMAZING!

I love it it has enough drama, but so much romance omg it's amazing. I'm more curious about why Pan left. I mean who would want to leave any one like's nonsense lol

Update Soon!
june chapter 8 . 11/4/2011
I love this story! and the dream was very well written :)
Little Miss Z chapter 8 . 11/3/2011
okay im quite a picky reader

sometimes i story alert things just cause they may have potential or they made me laugh or something stupid, so when a story alert appears in my inbox i don't get too excites about

except when its this one

this story is by far the one i look most forward to, its my favourite pairing written so beautifully, its also funny, clever, cute, hot, creative and suspenseful

i am so glad you continued to write it
Celebrien chapter 8 . 11/2/2011
So glad to see a new chapter for this! I really enjoy the way you capture Pan's emotions, and how complex they are. The dream she had threw me off so badly until it was revealed that she was just dreaming! Hahaha
Loregar chapter 8 . 11/2/2011
Welcome back! I thought you decided not to continue this fic. Hope you update soon, I missed it :)
Himawari 19 chapter 8 . 11/1/2011
Oh my gosh that scene was HOT! And all a dream!

I think I know why she left, how heartbreaking ;(

Love it!
Himawari 19 chapter 7 . 11/1/2011
Trunks deal in the last chapter made me tear up! I haven't read this story in a while so I had to piece some things together as I went. I love it it's so sweet seeing them reconnect.
Cosmic-lover chapter 8 . 11/1/2011
Another wonderful chapter! It was definitely interesting :) I was really happy that you've update. Nice work
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