Reviews for Bella's First Spanking
Isabella B chapter 1 . 8/14
I love it, but you switched POVs and it was a bit jarring.
Footsie chapter 1 . 5/9
Yes you should write more!:-)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16
No, I don't really like how Edward seems like a good guy. If Bella was upset, I might have been fine because Bella acts like she LIKES getting hurt in the books,but the fact that it seems like Edward is good and this is a norm doesn't make me like this very much. Perhaps make it clearer that Edward is a bad person and thinks this is normal but it really isn't?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/9
Please write more with a lemon and much harder spankings, maybe with a belt!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25
heck yeagh write more
BrynAlyssia chapter 1 . 1/28
Poor Bella. Maybe Jacob will break Edward's jaw.
MickieClaire chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
I like it. -)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
Yes write more
Scarlette chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
I love that we're getting both perspectives, though it's a little confusing. You might want to use different typefaces so that we know who's talking. But I love that the behavior is about her safety, not money. Guys seem to want to make everything about money and it does not evoke that wonderful "being taken care of and loved" place I always want it to come from. You're doing a good job. Keep going!
kittyranma chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
Oh yes really you should write more. I really enjoyed this.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
Please write more!
wolfyboy2 chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
wow good spanking on her
lizz somerhalder chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
More more more!
bigdick6969 chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
FUCKING ABUSIVE! he should go 2 jail.
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