Reviews for Bella's First Spanking
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9
Yes write more
Scarlette chapter 1 . 6/24
I love that we're getting both perspectives, though it's a little confusing. You might want to use different typefaces so that we know who's talking. But I love that the behavior is about her safety, not money. Guys seem to want to make everything about money and it does not evoke that wonderful "being taken care of and loved" place I always want it to come from. You're doing a good job. Keep going!
kittyranma chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
Oh yes really you should write more. I really enjoyed this.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
Please write more!
wolfyboy2 chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
wow good spanking on her
lizz somerhalder chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
More more more!
bigdick6969 chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
FUCKING ABUSIVE! he should go 2 jail.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
he took a belt to her for more stinging.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
Yes you should
Anynimous chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
yes it was so sweet
nevin chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
Yes you should write another one
skye chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
yes that was halarois i loved it but that was kinda rude for edward to spank bella
OPOSOJOJ chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
yum!
beve9110 chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Yes please write more
sammieanne chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
Yes, you did not beat her, the spanking was foreplay when you write more squeeze a lemon up in there...
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