Reviews for Whole
mutive chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
This is so beautifully done. Delicate and rather biter sweet. I love that they do come to an agreement of sorts, and that you make it clear how painful (and yet possible) it is to love two people in very different ways. This really is quite a lovely story.
Prisoner 24601 chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
You know this is rather beautiful. I'm always a sucker for stories where characters try to make the best of impossible situations so this was lovely to see. I can most definitely see Alistair falling in love with Anora unexpectedly, and the two women sitting down and trying to find a way to make this situation work.
JessicaJones chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Oh, Alistair. He would think that a threesome was a good idea, silly boy. Well done. I love the ending.
Traxits chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
Oh, I like this a lot, vehlr. I love seeing Alistair growing, his two women also learning to coexist. I like this sort of three-way relationship though; always found it fascinating.
Abydos Jackson chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
This is wonderful. I love it. I want to dislike Anora, but you've softened her here.