|Reviews for Somewhere|
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/16
| the newest daughter chapter 5 . 3/2/2013
Why would jasper do something so stupid
| lol chapter 2 . 10/10/2012
I don't think that Jasper would think like that! It's very kitschy
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/27/2012
I think the fight scene was great! You did a really good job.
| EmiMe chapter 19 . 8/10/2010
OMG! i love the ENDING AND THE FIGHTING AND EVERYTHING lol...
| darlin.i.love.you chapter 19 . 7/11/2010
i loved this!
| WantsToBeAWriter13 chapter 19 . 7/2/2010
I really liked this fic, and Chloe's power was an interesting one. It was a clever take on this common idea of the Volturi kidnapping Alice for their own gain, so commendations to you for that, although, I am afraid that I have to point out a few several minor grammatical mistakes and spelling mistakes. The cahracters were well written too, although I was sure about Aro screaming in one chapter, he is usually a little more reserved, but we never saw him lose his temper in the books so your take is as good as any. I really enjoyed this story, so well done.
| MelxxWhoLuvsYa chapter 2 . 4/26/2010
I like how this is going so far. I wonder how Aro erased her memory though.
Guess I have to keep reading to find out! :) Which is a treat!
| Hippodamia chapter 19 . 4/24/2010
This was a great, action-packed story. I read it straight through. Thank you for sharing it.
A few edit comments:
Is there a reason your sentences are not formatted into paragraphs? It makes reading much less distracting.
Also, you use 'defiantly' when you mean 'definitely' on several occasions.
| the captains wife chapter 19 . 3/14/2010
This was a wonderful story!
I loved it!
| Fritz as Pritz chapter 19 . 3/13/2010
I really love this story and I'm sad that's it's over... :(
| ThatOneQuirkyFangirl chapter 19 . 3/13/2010
Aw so sweet I loved it!
| TillITryIllNeverKnow chapter 19 . 3/13/2010
Thank you for all your work on a wonderful read. From beginning to end this story had action, suspense, drama, and most importantly devotion! The moral being the absence of such devotion makes one weaker, not stronger as Aro always believes. The Cullens survive through their devotion to their mates, their beliefs, and in a way, to each other as a whole. We should all be so smart and lucky!
| marsbareater12 chapter 19 . 3/12/2010
The end! Great job! :( its over...
| Crismebella chapter 19 . 3/12/2010
Good job! A very interesting idea of getting Alice. Thanks for a good read.