Reviews for Take Care Of My Heart
EmmettMonkeyMan chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
aww wow! this story is really great to come across because my 13 year old sister has had dilated cardiomyopathy since she was little and she has loads of tests, shes had many surgeries too and seeing it in my favourite book is amazing! :)

love your stories!
Dedralithie chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Wow! Touching. I knew once it was said that Alice has the same bloodtype as Bella, I knew something was going to happen (foreshadowing). Again, just wow. You are a great writer. Are you writing your own stories? -Dedra
SamieJamesBait chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
I thought it would be Alice who died. his was very sad. The shoelace scene was beautiful. :)
msfleabite chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
WOW! i love your storys this is the second story i have cryed over! i have read like 4 of your storys and i am going to read more of them! you keep writing and i will keep reading!
YourLittleMonster chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
oh my godddd!

Seriously, i'm crying like a baby! This is amazing, really didn't expect Edward to die :(

Saddest one shot I've read in a very long time

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blackroses-heartsdrippingblood chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
i cried reading this it was so heart wrenching you did really great writing this not many stories make me cry like your story did
TwilightNJonas4Ever chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Omg this was so sad but sweet as well! Amazingly written & great job :)
Belladollyn chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
So sad It makes my heart hurt
greeneyedmonster chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
horrible. plain horrible...

not the way u wrote the story but poor poor edward. *sniffles*

and did u have to kill him so suddenly?

one sec hez there the next sec hez dead!

sssssssso sad!
ALPS chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
That was so heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time. Half-way through the story, I had a hunch that Edward was going to die instead. Can't say that I was happy I was right. I understand why he had to die in this story but god, that was so sad, I can't stop crying. Beautiful, touching story, my friend!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
:') that was the saddest cutest thing in the world
TwilightFan2694 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
I'm currently crying my eyes out. I mean, I knew it was a tragedy, but I thought it would be Bella who died, which would still be sad. I kinda had a feeling though that it would be Edward who donated to Alice and Bella... Great story! I loved it. )
SimplyMayhem chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
i cried. this was an amazing story.
Thats-So-Alex chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
I didn't see that coming! Ever! As horrible as this sounds I was hoping Alice would die and then there'd be a happy ending for Bella and Edward!

Loved it though, so much. It was wonderful. :)
mimimgr chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
I didn't think that was going to happen, I thought either Bella or Alice where going to die to save the other. Your way was much more heart pulling. Yes I did cry, still have tears in my eyes.
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