Reviews for The Caretaker
arickmaniac2020 chapter 23 . 1/8
I really loved your story. Such a different premise. Done so well. Well written! Thank you for sharing!
J4ckL1n3 chapter 11 . 1/5
I love this chapter so much! This is honestly one of my favorite fics on here, mostly because of the drama and how everything just fits and gets sorted out in the end. Soooo good! I don’t even know how many times I’ve read it… 3 this!
DaturaRosier chapter 1 . 1/3
I loved this. Honestly I don't know how to express it well enough. I would love to see more from this universe. Like Rose Draco or Ron lavender..I think your idea of soul bonds is fabulous.

Thank you for writing this.
beckyzoso chapter 23 . 11/2/2021
Aw! That was awesome! Thank you for such a wild and turbulent ride, I was afraid the plane wouldn't make it a moment or eighty, but you navigated it perfectly. Thanks for sharing your skills!
beckyzoso chapter 20 . 11/2/2021
Omg I'm almost done with this story. I'm at work squeeing and grinning ear to ear. This is so exciting! Snape's smirk/sneer of "No" was just too damned perfect! So Snape! You got him down. I am loving this!
beckyzoso chapter 18 . 11/2/2021
Wow my heart hurts after this chapter. Oof.
I am feeling very conflicted. I absolutely love protective/threatening Snape standing watch outside of Ron's office. The silent, unseen predator watching his prey. I know I shouldn't like it, but damn if it didn't get me going! Loving this!
And you've done a damn fine job of making Ron's choices seem understandable, but I still want him to fall off his broom into the lake and become squid sandwiches. Muahaha.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/14/2021
OMG, the same color!
alannalove1990 chapter 1 . 6/11/2021
This seems like a good ine
slytherinxbadxgirl chapter 23 . 5/27/2021
this was great. I was a little hesitant at first, but you did an amazing job.
Guest chapter 23 . 5/20/2021
Loved flying AA, awesome ride. Even on my second time through!
Guest chapter 18 . 5/20/2021
Wow, this is so brief but it made me cry.
HermioneSparta chapter 23 . 5/14/2021
I couldn't stop reading.. Wonderful.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2021
I’ve noticed a pattern with your stories though I’ll admit I haven’t read them all.

You start off incredibly. Your vocabulary is wonderful and your writing style mesmerises me completely. Your background and character development captives a reader into going further without blinking.
But then it starts—the incessant allusion/insinuation to sex and sex drive. I know, sex is a need, both in life and in a romance novel. But after a certain point quite early in the story, all that remains is sex, talks about sex, thoughts about sex, so on and so forth.

I know your stories are rated appropriately, but eventually the storyline, the plot, all thins down to sexual gratification.
Really? Can’t love thrive without constant need of pleasure? Or can’t a story blossom without the incessant scenes hinting in that direction?
I’ve read a very famous Severus-Hermione fanfic by Kylie Sebastian (a masterpiece truly) and believe me, you, the two main characters literally decide not to take their romantic relationship into that direction at all due to several reasons. And yet, that fanfiction is rated the highest on the website.

Please don’t take me as a rude, judgemental bastard (though probably you already are), your stories are beautiful, I’ll confess I’ve purloined a few words from your writing to expand my own vocabulary (yes, that one, too). But I suggest that you should take it as a challenge and weave a story from your beautiful mind where sex is not a driving force.

I apologise for crossing any limits. Tgank you for reading my review.

Mae
Troys chapter 23 . 4/19/2021
A fantastic fic which deserves more commendations.
P.S. I do love wedding night the most.
Troys chapter 19 . 4/19/2021
It’s ridiculous for Hermione to think all those miserable things are all her faults, as if she didn’t suffer from them at all.

It’s her who chose to stick to the wife’s place even while being triggered by the other man who can make her extremely happy.
It’s her who tried to ignore her husband’s affair to protect her children and her family.
It’s not her who wanted to be bonded with her former professor or live in an unhappy life.

I’ve seen Hermione’s effort to try to make everything run in the right way, while on Ron, what I’ve seen were just selfishness and foolishness.
Not only one sentence of “I tried to love her, but she just wouldn’t love me back” can make all cheating and betrayal forgivable.
If you want to make Ron seem innocent, you should make him act more to fix the relationship with Hermione and pay more attention to his kids, not always blame on others and look for mistresses which will endanger their whole family.

After all these shitty things he had done, it’s just unexpected and kind of unacceptable for me to see Hermione became the one in guilty.

How can she apologize for being pregnant when her husband-in-law sneaked out for some mistress and her husband-in-destiny cheated her to have sex?
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