sweet brave Ron, didnt see that coming, normally he is the booh-man...but that is a real good plot! thanks for sharing

dont know whats more eeewwww...Sprout or Dumbledorsex :D

A very nice story. Int

Brilliant story! Thank you!

I really enjoyed your story.

loved it

The banter was adorbs

The 2 first chapters has me bawling my eyes!

Love it! This is my second read. Thank you.

Wait so even though Snape was the one who knocked her up while polyjuice as Ron, if they did a DNA test on the kid, exactly WHO’s DNA will show up as a match on the kid as the father? Since he was Polyjuiced as Ron, did any of Severus actual DNA get into the kid at all, or is Ron’s polyjuiced DNA inside of Severus-Ron create the kid, and the kid will register as Ron’s kid if they did the test?

Human tongue makes a good and proper potion ingredient, just saying...
I don't like them all going mad. It also reeks cliché, the way they're behaving towards each other. It's sickening.
Don't take it as an offense, it's just how I feel, it's not as if you could avoid reaching this part of the story.

"If Severus had died in that shack, you and your husband most likely would have been very, very happy together." Which happened in Canon! Amazing way to include it! Snape's comment in this chapter confirm it but they aren't as powerful because he's too involved.
See that the lovers aren't too typical from now on, we had lots of fun in the previous chapters with all the angst and self-denial and I'm missing it.

Transition chapter, ok. The convention was a bit weird. Why doesn't Hermione recognize her boy's handwriting?

I get it... I guess. Hermione got it better, smartest witch indeed. I'm almost understanding of Ron now (glad this is not a bashing, I consider that cowardly). Can't Ron Bond with Lavender and leave the triangle? You could even add another layer of angst by saying Hermione must complete a bonding with Ron to free Snape, that two months are way too much for his sanity. I'm assuming we all remember Snape could still be thrown in jail for stealing potion ingredients.

Dangerous. Gotcha now. He was adorable with the stepson, by the way. His son-in-Slytherin, in a way.