"no reason for the child to be affected by the tragic circumstances of its conception." Good to know she has her priorities straight. I'm surprised Snape was so vocal with the portrait, but there must be a way for the info to reach Hermione. Also, great way to keep Ron in the dark.

My heart goes to Hermione and her unborn child. Hoping s/he has Snape's genes, I don't know how conception works when it involves polyjuice but all of their lives will be a lot easier. Oh but what a disaster, Snape can't tell her he's the dad and as soon as Ron finds out... I fear for the child's life.

Good to see you have a grasp on ethics. That interaction was lovely.

This was put of character for the Snape you have been depicting. In canon he's a bastard. Here he respected her. I honestly don't see how this amount of deceit can be forgiven. But now that I think of it, this is how King Arthur was conceived, so I'll ignore it for the sake of the story.

I knew it! I knew it! Do you think she'll find her "husband" far more amenable now? I know nothing'll happen, he's too gentlemanly and respects her far too much for such a deception, but oh the possibilities!

Oh, I get it now! "Whoever broke down and brought it out in the open first, lost status" Subtlety! You're a Slytherin! That's your spark!

Totally in love with the dynamic. Though I'm a bit wary of the implied cheating (I don't see the use of Ron in this story, not yet at least) I love the B&B references, the little details.

I love how imaginative you are when thinking original ways for them to interact and bond, there's always such wonderful partnership.

The biggest heart eyes! I loved this fanfic, so sweet and well written. The story was engaging and the characters so well flushed out but still flawed but also in a way where I wanted the best for them. I'm just rambling because I loved it so much and I can't wait to read more of your work.
Also super interested in the whole Draco and Rose dynamic, would LOVE to see more on that!

It's amazing how this story is able to really capture and hold one's attention especially when it is primarily from one person's point of view. Well done!

good story

Aww! So sweet! Interesting idea with the soul bond and all of the problems that came with it. Thanks for sharing!

I don’t know what I like more, the story or the author’s notes:)

Wonderful story. Truly enjoyed all the twists and turns. You are a great writer!

Thank you for your story! I love that Ron wasnt the bad guy but kinda victim along with all others and thanks soo much for happy ending!