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Guest chapter 29 . 6/18
I loved your story I just dont like the fact that edward all in love with Aver describing how his affection for her , then bammmm bellas back and he dumps her and proposes to bella on the same day! Sorry I didnt like that! I was hoping maybe instead bella visited the volturi Aver fall in love with Tom and they both agree to go there separate ways!
corteznutterz1 chapter 18 . 6/10
oooohhhhh wow…..great chapter
WiseOldSoul chapter 29 . 2/24
this is a "fun" cute story...
very light-hearted almost...
i didnt like edward's explanation of being with Avery.
that was too weak, very lame...
idk, just very dumb i think.
even after all this time, i would think he would still be brooding,
sad, depressed...like marcus who has lost his mate.
even with the story being cute and well done, that lame
excuse almost ruins it all...at least for me.
otherwise, well done.
Guest chapter 29 . 6/13/2015
Love? Hell no, its not love.
killer4853 chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
like
Motherof8 chapter 29 . 8/29/2013
I really loved this story. I was unhappy with Edward for most of it . Didn't like his reasonings fo being with avar. But I an happy with the outcome. Great writing. Thanks for this story.
tysedon chapter 29 . 6/26/2013
LOVE this story!
this is my favourite twilight fanfict so far!
thanks for writing this story!
it's kinda strange that jasper wasn't confused by bella's strong emotions when she's near edward though(when she hasn't revealed who she really was)
but all in all, I LOVE THIS STORY!
Aminah chapter 29 . 4/4/2013
Such a good, mysterious story! :-D:-D:-D
WinterSoulZ chapter 2 . 12/13/2012
Is full house the koren drama
Elevator Cakes chapter 2 . 9/28/2012
Can we see edward now? Please?
Lol
Loke it!
LOL
It means I Love and Like it.
LOL
I sound like a blonde don't I?
I'm going to stop.
Elevator Cakes chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
HEY!
Lol
Love it!
twivampsalvatore chapter 29 . 9/3/2012
AWESOME!
KyomiTheAvatar chapter 23 . 7/8/2012
She got vampnapped XD
Margret1221 chapter 29 . 5/18/2012
Loved it! :)
iloveemmettbear chapter 29 . 4/20/2012
Can you please do a chapter of how aver and Tom get together/married?

xoxo
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