Reviews for Competition
HotchsGirl chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
this is such a great story!

I like the way David and Colby are talking to eachother

and how you captured the dynamic of their relationship.

thanks a lot for posting it.
Xxmutant girlXx chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
belana chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Great to see another story from you. Really enjoyed it. Such a great follow-up to a great episode. Many thanks. Look forward to more. Thanks again.
Thesaurusgirl chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Loved this! You showed a side of David that we don't get to see on the show. And also an aspect of David and Colby's friendship that is not ususually shown and you did a great job of it. It's nice to see the characters given dimension and depth. The wresting match was funny. I'd like to tickle Colby myself, wouldn't you?
TheNaggingCube chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Wow... this hit a hidden sore that I don't think many of us thought about. You sure have made me think on it now. Very well told. The wrestling... come on even tired Colby wins, except when David tickles cuz we know Colby is really ticklish... I hope he is.
JazzieG chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Loved it! The first bit with the snoring David and the cautious Colby was a nice touch. Though my favourite bit has to be the tackle, you can just picture the pair of them rolling around on the floor like big kids. Had me giggling away to myself!