Sadly this chapter really just doesn't feel like it fits in the story. Harry and Hermione lose all their training and skills built up and established in the story. I read over some of the other comments on this chapter and have to echo them, this feels like cheap drama. You comment in the next chapters author note mocking reader feedback and its your story to do so, but this chapter does not follow the logic you built up. It was written completely divorced from what you wrote and done solely to add drama and stakes, and it suffers greatly for it. This whole fight is designing just to make the characters suffer to try to wring out audience empathy, but it doesn't work because it has no internal consistency with the rest of the story.

As far as typing ‘embirsiphonelilathia’ correctly every time… copy/paste can be your best friend sometimes.

Wow, what an awful fight. No tactical movements or anything, especially after what happening in the department of mysteries I would have expected a much better response from Harry and Hermione. Shame on them

The evil dark lord Cliffy still makes me laugh

After more than 10 years I re-read this story. It is an enjoyable, entertaining and non-frustrating read. I liked that there are lots of surprising twists and that Harry is kicking ass.

what a waste of time

I love it when hermione gets all badass in fics.

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Giggity

"most divorces I know have started with the lack of sex"

I'd argue that this is a symptom of the actual issue, which is a lack of expressed love.

You can love someone, emotionally, while showing none at all, and I see a lot of people fail to express love, or perhaps mistake lust for it. Sex is an expression of love as well as lust. So if you have neither, or express neither, your relationship isn't going well.

This doesn't mean it isn't possible to have a very loving relationship without sex, it very much is. But lack of sex is a very obvious symptom of the actual problems in many relationships

I think the people you had trouble with don't understand that a kink doesn't make up someone's entire personality.

Honestly, this one isn't all that unbelievable for Hermione.

what the actual fuck kind of drugs is the author on? i mean that in the worst way possible, NOONE asked for harry potter and the retarded pirates adventure.

offense fully intended, what the fuck is this nonsense?

annnnnnd you turned hermione into a bumbling retard...the story was going so well and you ruined it in a few sentences.

hermione being ready and willing to shank a bitch with NO hesitation is...amazing. what a gigachad.