Reviews for Rocking the Boat
HeartsGlow chapter 7 . 5/20
Andromeda and Sirius were first cousins, making Tonks Sirius' first cousin once removed. Harry, as Sirius' heir, would then be Tonks' second cousin, not her uncle nor she his aunt. If you are using Charlus and Dorea (Black) Potter as Harry's grandparents, it is Dorea that the relationship comes from. Dorea was the daughter of Cygnus Black. No matter how you look at it, Tonks and Harry are cousins.
pixelbun1 chapter 1 . 5/10
ending felt a bit rushed. The weird Harry Hermione D/s thing a bit... unresolved.
Anon chapter 33 . 5/2
Good story but ridiculous ending.
Sab81790 chapter 33 . 5/1
Wow! What an ending! Kudos!
Sab81790 chapter 27 . 5/1
I'm so confused! Hermione killed 'Nott' and tied up the girl, but then Nott is the one that walked into the hospital wing and someone else was dead in the black bundle, but then they turn around and ask Hermione questions about the death Nott. Why, when he was clearly alive and someone else was in the black bundle dead? And they explained to Hermione that Nott was actually the 'girl' not the one who died because they watched him transform, so who did she kill? But then later she is freaking out about killing 'Nott' when she already knows that it wasn't really him, it was someone else. So was Malfoy the one who actually killed? And if so, why does she forget that the aurers already told her that Nott was in fact the lookout, not the one she hit, which then in turn causes her to not ask who was disguised as Nott? Did I mention I'm confused? lol
Sab81790 chapter 19 . 5/1
Ok I had to stop mid-chapter to review because this is driving me batty! Where was the lemon?! You had a lovely start to what could have been a delicious scene but then... nothing! Is this an edited version of the story? Because if it is I would really love to know if the un-edited one is out there somewhere, lol.
Sab81790 chapter 18 . 5/1
I guess I'm confused about Dumbledore's hand, all of the hints earlier in the story lead me to believe that the horcrux's were destroyed. Although maybe Dumbledore had already tried on the ring before that? If I remember correctly, in the books it happened the instant he put the ring on his finger. Idk how I'm asking, lol. So far you have been pretty good at not leaving plot holes so I'm sure this will get answered later. (Although I'm still curious about the apparation on the island) I hope I haven't sounded too down about the story in my previous reviews, because I actually am really enjoying it so far. It's really well written and I love how you are writing the relationship between Dumbledore and Harry. Some tend to write his actions off as him being a manipulating bastard just for the sake of ie but I truly don't think that that was the truth at all. He was manipulating Harry but I truly do think he thought he was doing what he thought was best. It couldn't have been easy trying to do both what was best for Harry but also what was best for defeating Voldemort. Especially when the two things colided and one would have to win over the other. Also, just because he was older, more powerful than most, and extremely intelligent doesn't mean he wasn't human, and that gets forgotten a lot. It shouldn't be a surprise he made few mistakes along the way really, at least when he talks to Harry at the end it is acknowledged and he expresses genuine regret about it. I hope your Dumbledore does the same eventually, especially because he has a lot more to apologise for than canon Dumbledore.
Sab81790 chapter 15 . 5/1
I thought that apparation wasn't allowed on the island? Or is it just that you can't apparate on or off of the island, but once you're there you can apparate on it? Hmmmm
Sab81790 chapter 11 . 4/30
Awww! I'm so disappointed that you didn't continue the scene! I understand not wanting to do 'porn', but there is a big difference between that and having a quality story with a good plot that just so happens to have some lemons in it. This has all the makings of the second one. You hint around enough about it, I want an actual lemon! It wouldn't deter from the story at all, at least in my opinion, it would just add another quality to it and make it that much better. You write everything else so well and have a great storyline going, so adding a few lemons definitely w would not put your story in the 'porn' category.
Jedi Jessic chapter 7 . 4/20
What happened to Dumble's hand. It can't be because of the ring as it should have been destroyed with the others.
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 33 . 4/16
Loved this story. Although I thought there were tons of times that Harry’s wandless magic should have been used, I’m happy with it and am hoping the sequel is ready for reading.
Guest chapter 8 . 4/13
Good good
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Guest chapter 5 . 4/2
Good good
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