Reviews for PORTFOLIO
Ealasaid Una chapter 3 . 1/30
please continue. who is at the door?
Edward's spouse chapter 3 . 9/10/2011
interesting. cannot wait for more.
girlwithwings2 chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
keep writing
I-luv-Edward-Cullen18 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
are you going to update the story or are you done with it?
Twisted Musalih chapter 3 . 9/27/2010
It's very good.
writergal24 chapter 3 . 8/22/2010
Oh God. Who is at her door? And she better tell Jasper soon! He needs to know. And how did Jasper meet Alice anyway?

So many questions. Must be answered. Update soon.

Butterfly Betty chapter 3 . 3/8/2010
Great job but I would suggest that instead of using the letters E and B to mark a change in dialong that you just begin each change on a new line. Much easier to read. But I like it sdo far and look forward to seeing where you take this.
Butterfly Betty chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Nice first chapter:)
PolkaDotButterfly chapter 3 . 3/5/2010
And you get at me for cliff hangers lol

I really quite i like this story! I am in hospital at lot and i wish i had a doctor that was asking me out during the appt! (Well my bf wouldn't be happy but hey)

Cant wait for more!

Oh and i think i am becoming Alice because when they were in the car park in the last chapter i pictured Bella having a Mini cooper! I was right heheh
PolkaDotButterfly chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
Ok corrections to my first review. I don't normally read stories where the characters are noramlly vampires but are human. I see there are still vampires.

Good chapter. "Hello Emmet, it's nice to meet you too, ouch, you're hurting my hand..." haha i love Emmett! Trust him to nearly crush her hand lol

It's good that Bella has not falling in love with Edward stright away and i am glad he doesn't want to kill her either lol
PolkaDotButterfly chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
I dont normally read human fanfics. But i like this one! I can picture it all going on. I can see Bella and Jasper in my mind and they are not the same as the characters in the book!

I really like it!
ele05gs chapter 3 . 3/1/2010
OMG! you left a cliffhanger! so unfair! lol

I would give you an advice, every time someone else is talking you separate them with an enter that way you don't have to put E or B or whatever...

You can also get a beta that would help you a lot!

So, now I'm confused is he a vampire or not? some times he seems to be and then not...

anway, great chapter...

Please update soon!

luv. ~E.
ele05gs chapter 2 . 3/1/2010
I think I like your Edward... no, wait. I KNOW I like your Edward!

Just one question, Are they vampires? if that's so then if Bella is about to die (and I hope she isn't) he can save her!

So... Alice great like always, just like Esme, Carlisle and Emmet! And Rosalie, just Rosalie.. lol

I liked it a lot... now I'm gonna go read the 3rd chapter!
ele05gs chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
hi! I read it!

Okay.. um... cancer? that's is totally sad!

Oh! and you left a cliffhanger which is totally unfair! lol

I liked it, I did! now I won't keep talking because I still have two chapter to read...
Kimmydonn chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
Well, it is fairly well written. I'm just getting drawn in. DOn't know if I could say exactly why...
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