Reviews for Goes Unsaid
Kittendragon chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
i think you should write a companion piece where Jim finally gets to tell Spock what he wanted to.:)
MyriadProBold chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
That's very interesting. I've never thought of Spock and Jim as lovers. Maybe you could explore that idea more.
bohemian-rhapsodi chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
This is a perfect take on what Shatner portrayed in WoK and SfS... the right balance of regret and sadness, I love it! Thanks a million!
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
wow that was intense so much feeling and stuff great job
lyra vega chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.
Anbessette chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
You didn't quite kill me with angst, but I'll take those cookies, thanks. Sad, but the depth of emotion behind Jim's grief was wonderful. It tended to get a bit repetitive at times - maybe that was you trying to match the story to the song, or underscore the theme of 'home' or just Jim's thoughts going around in circles. You worked in the lyrics very subtly and naturally.

Spelling/grammar nitpick: 'horde' should have been 'hoard'.