Reviews for The Family Business
Aoiika chapter 7 . 5/30
I know i'm extremely late, ice-age-scale late tot he party, but this was one of the most exciting and enthralling romantic scenes I've read. I'm grinning as much as they are! :D
kalizivis chapter 31 . 1/14
I loved this story. Thank you!
twirob chapter 31 . 12/8/2017
AWESOME! little story ;D nicely wrapped up :) It was a shame that they didn't have their extra powers but I suppose it wasn't needed for this story ;) thanks for completing and posting it for us ;D
adores.dylan chapter 3 . 8/1/2017
This story is BAD-FRERAKIN'-ASS. YOU rOcK mY sOcKs, ChIcA! Ash
Guest chapter 31 . 7/31/2017
Loved this story!
Guest chapter 13 . 7/29/2017
I love the man card reference! Definitely made me smile!
Guest chapter 9 . 7/26/2017
Wow! Great far! I can't wait to see what you do with these two?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/26/2017
This story is a little different such as, they drink beer, and obviously eat since Esme told Edward she would have kept a plate warm for him! I am sad that Bella has been bitten so early in the story because of what it might mean for her relationship with Charlie! Of course, I am a Team Edward all the way and hope that all works out! Great writing skills by the way!
jk chapter 10 . 5/5/2017
ive got an about bella just kills all the cullens...since they are a fucking threat to her life! and then she can move on and forget about them...vampire ASS
jk chapter 4 . 5/5/2017
did I read chapter 1 wrong? I thought he was a vampire that killed bad vamps? hes fucking human? and jake likes alice? bitch please...alice is fucking ugly
jk chapter 1 . 5/5/2017
this story doesn't really flow right does it? its seems really random at times...not a good start!
Guest chapter 31 . 7/18/2016
Great story! Had never read a vampella and humanward fic before, was really entertaining. Thanks for writing xx
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
Just finished this. Great job! Really well written.
dnmann chapter 31 . 2/13/2016
Unique, amazing, well plotted and written story. One of a kind on .

Thank you.
SarcasticBimbo chapter 31 . 4/25/2015
I don't know if you're still around, but I wanted to tell you that I think this was one of the most inventive Twilight fanfics I've ever read. I love the way you twisted the original story to the almost exact opposite of what it was, but still had some familiar themes running through it. Edward's and the rest of the Cullens' need to protect Bella, the Volturi's single mindedness and Aro's greed. The Quileutes' ready help with Edward and Bella's escape. This was a fantastic fic and I absolutely DEVOURED it. I just spent the last 12 hours in a familiar world, but with enough twists that it made it completely new. Thank you for sharing your IMMENSE talent.
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