Reviews for The Family Business
JasmineDragon22 chapter 31 . 8/11
What a fun fic. Loved it from beginning to end.
Aoiika chapter 7 . 5/30
I know i'm extremely late, ice-age-scale late tot he party, but this was one of the most exciting and enthralling romantic scenes I've read. I'm grinning as much as they are! :D
kalizivis chapter 31 . 1/14
I loved this story. Thank you!
twirob chapter 31 . 12/8/2017
AWESOME! little story ;D nicely wrapped up :) It was a shame that they didn't have their extra powers but I suppose it wasn't needed for this story ;) thanks for completing and posting it for us ;D
adores.dylan chapter 3 . 8/1/2017
This story is BAD-FRERAKIN'-ASS. YOU rOcK mY sOcKs, ChIcA! Ash
Guest chapter 31 . 7/31/2017
Loved this story!
Guest chapter 13 . 7/29/2017
I love the man card reference! Definitely made me smile!
Guest chapter 9 . 7/26/2017
Wow! Great story...so far! I can't wait to see what you do with these two?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/26/2017
This story is a little different such as, they drink beer, and obviously eat since Esme told Edward she would have kept a plate warm for him! I am sad that Bella has been bitten so early in the story because of what it might mean for her relationship with Charlie! Of course, I am a Team Edward all the way and hope that all works out! Great writing skills by the way!
jk chapter 10 . 5/5/2017
ive got an idea...how about bella just kills all the cullens...since they are a fucking threat to her life! and then she can move on and forget about them...vampire hunters...lol...MY ASS
jk chapter 4 . 5/5/2017
did I read chapter 1 wrong? I thought he was a vampire that killed bad vamps? hes fucking human? and jake likes alice? bitch please...alice is fucking ugly
jk chapter 1 . 5/5/2017
this story doesn't really flow right does it? its seems really random at times...not a good start!
Guest chapter 31 . 7/18/2016
Great story! Had never read a vampella and humanward fic before, was really entertaining. Thanks for writing xx
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
Just finished this. Great job! Really well written.
dnmann chapter 31 . 2/13/2016
Unique, amazing, well plotted and written story. One of a kind on .

Thank you.
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