Reviews for These Taboos Three
larryjc chapter 1 . 11/3/2015
The wording of the poem is good but it doesn't exactly have the kind of rhyming and musical arrangement you will find in a poem for kids.
Wheelwright chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Good morning!

While I commend you for writing poetry, you might take a second look at the metre of your verses. They don't exactly scan. If a poem were recited in school every morning, both the teachers and the students would grind it down to something that doesn't make your tongue stumble over it.

The-Lady-Smaell chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
_ Cute I like it. I have so got the most fab image in my head. Nicely written and enjoyable.
Discordia42 chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
I liked it lots. :) Poems don't get enough attention on this site. Even if this is supposed to be more of a ninja pledge thing.