Reviews for Control
shit eatter xxx chapter 1 . 5/11
ValeryJosephSalonHERE AS A FAN OF PETERXUNCLEBEN I FIND THIS FUCKING RETARDED AS I THINK HARRY IS FUCKING STUPID AS HIS DICK IS TOO SMALL FOR HARRY MEANWHILE UNCLE BENS DICK IS FUCKING HUGE AND I LOVE IMAGINING IT POUNDING ME IM TOTALLY NOT GAY BY THE WAY NO REALLY I ONLY SUCKED DICK LIKE TWENTY TIMES A DAY AND THATS ONLY ON GOOD DAYS REST OF THE DAYS I JUST DREAM OF THE TIME I FUCKED THIRTY GUYS IN ONE SITTING WHILE STILL WATCHING MY FAVORITE ANIMAE CORY IN THE HOUSE WHERE THE BLACK GUY FUCKS THE PRESIDENT IT IS TOTALLY UNREALISTIC BECAUSE CORY'S DICK IS TOTALLY NOT THAT SMALL NOT THAT I KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT CORY'S DICK DICK DICK DICK PIZZA PIZZA AND SUCKING DICK WHERE WAS I OH YEA APPLESAUCE AND FUCK THE GOVERNMENT CUZ I DONT GIVE A FUCK ALRIGHT NOW LETS TALK ABOUT CURRENT EVENTS I TOTALLY THINK THAT HITLER DOESN'T EXIST BECAUSE THE HOLOCAUST DIDNT KILL EVERYONE THATS WHAT MY GAY GRAND PAPPY TOLD ME THAT ALL THE BITCHES WANT A SMALL DICK SO THEY CAN FEEL SUPERIOR AOBUT THEMSELVES WE THEY COMPARE DICK SIZES NOW THAT OUR CHAPTER IS DONE IM GOIN TO WRITE MY DICK PAPER ABOUT DICK BY DICK PUBES DICK EDITED BY THE EVANGELICAL ANTHONYNV
Guest chapter 2 . 4/23
Please write more!
Guest chapter 2 . 12/13/2014
I loved it! I actually liked the second one more not that tge first wasn't good but i preferred the second poor Peter
Candy3314 chapter 2 . 7/13/2014
Oh so horrible, but hey, that's what I'm here for. Harry's so brutal and damn Peter is so Peter. It's the saddest thing to read, and I'm tired and it's 3 am to boot. I agreed to driving my friend to church tomorrow so... maybe I can get a spiritual cleansing? xD lol Great story, does just as it's spoused to. I'm not too sure about the Spiderman sequel, tho. I kinda liked this 'non-hero' universe and I think it suits the situation better. Oh well, do as you please :) It's your story.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/25/2014
Hey there.. So... You write good. Me like. I just love weak, apologetic Peter, and you portrayed him beautifully the sequel(I guess) sounds cool! Please do so. Love your work3
Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
plese please pleeease update this im begging you
GlOmP3R chapter 2 . 3/21/2014
No, don't end it there ! Update soon ! Poor Peet ! Updateeeee !
Tara story chapter 2 . 2/19/2014
I'm wet... 0-0 anybody feel the same?
Guest chapter 2 . 10/27/2013
I'm not sure if this is am old story or not but I can't imagen u not liking a review so in my opinion I think ur talented and I have to say thank u couse u gave me the kick I need to get past my writers block so go u!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
It was absolutely amazing, you're a brilliant writer
Gabby chapter 2 . 9/3/2012
that sounds like a good idea. or it could be one of the avangers, all the big manly heros, i have a guter mind.
love-heart-heart chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
Eh? Is this all? PLEASE... RIGHT MORE!
RejectedShyRebel18 chapter 2 . 5/31/2012
This wasn't bad at all! You did a awesome jobs!
The lady loves the dark chapter 2 . 1/22/2012
Aaaaaaw so sad that this has ended! Harry has lost his mind and Peter's self worth has been destroyed, his freedom too taken away. But I enjoyed every bit! I'm really sick n twisted but wow you brought every fantasy to live with the last chapter! Well done I loved your story soooooo much! Thank you for this delicious treat!
The lady loves the dark chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Loving it. Hmm I think Harry is a bit obsessed with Petter. I'm loved loved the chappie 1 n i'm going on to chappie 2.
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