Reviews for A new life?
Sanjoukibi chapter 7 . 3/27/2011
Some constructive criticism: work on your grammar because no offense, but it's awful and distracted me a lot when reading your story. Anyway, good start but make the chapters longer
kyra.storms chapter 7 . 11/7/2010
firstly i just want to say im really sorry for your loss...

my review: this a really intriguing story...i cant wait to see what happens hard to picture goku with someone else but id like to see where this and tc :)

kyra
DoubleBinConnecticut chapter 7 . 9/20/2010
I'm glad your back writing again, and hope that you're doing well. Great Chapter. Hurry with the next chapter :)
MsSerres4 chapter 7 . 9/17/2010
I'm in sock wright know,like this :o keep writing please and welcome back :)
kiara chapter 7 . 9/17/2010
You finally updated!

Well, I have some questions:

How Shia Goku tricks to sleep with her?

When we know the attack on Chichi?

When Chichi will start his new life with another man?

I'm glad you updated.

Hope to read another chapter soon.

A greeting.
MsSerres4 chapter 6 . 8/26/2010
*new reader*your story is really good,write whenever you can!I'm sorry for your lost,I hope you get emotional better so don't worry I can wait :) sorry again
DoubleBinConnecticut chapter 6 . 8/25/2010
No need to apologize at all. Taking care of yourself right now is priority. Sorry for you loss.

God Bless,

DoubleBinConnecticut
kiara chapter 5 . 5/9/2010
Try to develop a little more history, because so far the only thing there is intrigue. You could do a little longer chapters. Updates soon.
Goten Trunks5 chapter 5 . 4/13/2010
updated as soon as possible please
XxSailorWinchesterXx chapter 5 . 4/13/2010
OMG Goku, spit it out

*yells sailorwinchester

and pulls out her hair*.

What a good chapter, short

but sweet. Can't wait til

the next one, update soon

please.
thirteenth chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
i like it! it sounds interesting and mysterious! and i liked how you started this out. Kinda of like a mini prologue. I hope you continue it!
Goten Trunks5 chapter 4 . 4/11/2010
continues with the story but you should make the chapters longer ... updated as soon as possible please
XxSailorWinchesterXx chapter 4 . 4/11/2010
Wow, i wonder what he did.

Did he cheat on her? Anywy

please upadate soon.
DoubleBinConnecticut chapter 4 . 4/10/2010
Great Chapter by Evil Cliffhanger. What did Goku do? Did he cheat on Chichi? Hurry with the next chapter. I must know what happened.
XxSailorWinchesterXx chapter 3 . 3/16/2010
hm, interesting. Please update soon
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