Reviews for Second Chance
dreaming.in.sepia chapter 2 . 6/17/2013
I started reading this on a whim and couldn't stop for about two hours. I realise you're unlikely to see this review, as it was completed in 2010, but I just had to post. All the characterisation was perfect, and it was such a beautifully written, carefully plotted and intricate story. I honestly think it's one of the best fanfictions I've ever read and I would have paid to read it. Thank you so much.
dreaming.in.sepia chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
I started reading this on a whim and couldn't stop for about two hours. I realise you're unl
Mystic Lover of the fairytale chapter 47 . 9/5/2012
This was a really good story though about the rakweed wish you had kept it to Luke being sick
NoraWalker chapter 40 . 12/2/2011
Alright, you didn't do this. It's just timey wimey stuff. He'll be back soon. Right? *despair coming through*
NoraWalker chapter 32 . 12/1/2011
Why do you have to be so damn good? Everytime I say "I'll read one more chapter and then go to bed" and when I realise, I'm seven chapter ahead the "one". I really love this story and feel like I'll have that "now what?" feeling when I end reading this, The Sattelite Series and The Family Home!
NoraWalker chapter 2 . 11/27/2011
I just started to read it, but I'm already in love. I was almost giving up finding a well-written Peter story when I found this. You write very very well and, blame on you I'm so sorry that I need to go to bed and can't keep reading right now.

Speaking of beds, I just loved the scenes of the Doctor in Sarah Jane's bed. This kind of things are so sweet, I'm very fond of them. :)

Anyway, congratulations!
Vilinye chapter 47 . 6/12/2011
I don't generally do AU's, but this one was written so well and worked out so great, I have to say well done!
Vilinye chapter 40 . 6/12/2011
I almost knew this would happen. I knew it was too good to last. And I thought the miscarriages were important hints, kind of like in Time Traveler's Wife...
thesunwillshineclear chapter 47 . 6/3/2011
Brilliant. Just brilliant!

(sometimes you don't need lots of words to explain :)
Tamira chapter 47 . 6/11/2010
And that IS a good ending... Happy Sarah Jane came around in the end... It wouldn'T be right if she stopped jumping into action when needed, if she killed her own cruiosity and interest in the weird thing the universe can show her...

She is hurting but one day it will only be a dull hurt, one never fully away but still realtively easy to live with...

... and one day she even might be able to forgive the Doctor...

Good Nicole helped the others through alien fights till Sarah Jane came through... good Nicole was there, period!

But I am still curious who that weird fortume teller was and what was up with her.. .and how the dream catcher oculd change universes...
Tamira chapter 46 . 6/11/2010
That was sad... maybe needed, maybe not.. .but at least there now is hope that the Doctor and Sarah Jane in the end work aorund it and can become something like friends again... And it is very obvious it was all Peter's decision... Nobody but he oculd have decided anyway, not with the Trickster being involved, it HAS to be the one who should be dead deciding for it...
Tamira chapter 45 . 6/11/2010
Huh? - THAT is realy confusing now... Did the Doctor time-nap Peter for a second good-bye or what? and how is it supposed to help in any way?
Tamira chapter 44 . 6/11/2010
All right... HOW wil lthings change at the funeral? I wish it means Peter will have another chance, but oyu might decide against that.. .but still, how? and will the freidnship of Sarah Jane and the Doctor be saved? ... I am reading here, staying up long past midnight, actually past two am by now and I just hope I get a sattisfacting ending... (is sattisfacting a real word, I think it is, ut sometimes my english knowledge plays tricks on me...9
Tamira chapter 43 . 6/11/2010
That's not fair, yo ucan not break their friendship like this! No, don'T you dare!

Uhm, sorry about this little explosion, but that should not be the end... sure, I know why everybody is mad at the Doctor, but please, what oculd he have done?

And they know this, too.. .but it does not change how they feel...
Tamira chapter 42 . 6/11/2010
What did he do? did he arrange the accident? I hope not, but the Doctor wil ldo what he has to if there is danger for the time-line... He will hate it, it will hurt him, but he will do it...

I do nto want the others to think bad of him, to hate him, though!
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