|Reviews for supernova|
| Alley-Oop chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Concrit? There is none. This is absolutely wonderful. Spectacular. It actually made my throat close up a little bit. And I'm not just blowing you crap, either. Seriously. This was very moving and amazing.
Team Seven RULES!
You did a fantastic job. I'm jealous of your awesomeness. You got the dynmaics down perfectly, and I love the overall metaphor of sun and earth and sea. Perfection. An abosolute paragon. ;)
| naynayshay chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
| callalily32 chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
absolutely wonderful! Perfect from beginning to end; i love kakashi's perspective and observations, it give the story a sense of authority it wouldn't have otherwise. great job!
| charlieslion chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
That was really lovely! I liked how Naruto is the sun, Sakura the earth, and Sasuke is the sea. It all fits together perfectly, and the writing is beautiful :)
| Arika Ito chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
Very good TEAM 7 fic. One of the best I've read. Keep up the good work!
| Chantrea Moonbeam chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
I love this story! One of the best Team 7 fics I've ever read. You wereable to enhance the metaphors of harmony several times and with definitely in character work.
| antlercrown chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
Ooh, this warms me up like sunshine on the inside :)
I liked this story very much.
First of all, I loved the metaphors (i think that's what it is..) to each member of Team 7. They fit very well with each other. I love the harmony of the team and how they all get along so well. I also enjoy the fact that the story is light and optimistic.
I guess the "I" in the middle threw me off for a second, but I later caught on after reading some more and I guessed it was Kakashi.
Mhm, definitely happy.
I miss Team 7. And oh, Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke, I don't know what to do with that boy anymore. Anyways, good luck with your school work and future writing :) !
| IPreferLemonPie chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
I. LOVE. IT. It was really awesome, and I love the sea and I think it's the perfect description of Sasuke(and Kanda3). Well, it was truelly amazing and ou are awesome. Very good author you are. I loove your fiics! Well gotta go! And this is my fave team 7 fanfic!
| moor chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
It is so neat how you wrote this from Kakashi's POV and showed how they accept him into their family, too. I like how you tie in the nature similes (metaphors?... been a while since I reviewed those old notes!), and found they really fit, in particular with forming a whole, a world, an entirety when they're together.
I wish canon was so optimistic, I love happy Team 7 fics like this!
I think you did a fine job!
| signalbox chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
| foreversnow chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Gotta love Team 7.
Awesome oneshot. ]
| m00kie chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
I really enjoyed the extended metaphor and how you built the story around it. The analogy was seamlessly incorporated into the action, which is a difficult thing to do. It was kind of cheesy, but this was a friendship fic, so cheesynees and gooeyness is a given.
At first I thought this story was from the point of a view of a random Konoha shinobi or something, so it was interesting to later find out that the shinobi was actually Kakashi. Having Kakashi's perspective on things was unique, though I thought he was too neutral for someone so close to Team Seven. It would have been cool if Kakashi was more opinionated and/or had more direct interaction with the team, but I think you wanted to write him as more of an observer.
Umm, since this was a friendship fic, I thought there was too much of Sakura. I know you have an affinity for writing her, but I think Naruto was somewhat overlooked because of your focus of her. He didn't seem to develop and played a minor role in the fic. It's natural for authors to favour one character over the others, but it's something that you may want to think about next time. Poor Naruto; he always tends to get pushed to the side even though he's the title character.
Anyway, I really liked the theme of their friendship and the easy flow of your writing. Great work, and update soon!
| MyUsedRomance chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
i liked this. the intro was fabulous.
I liked this, I loved it. It was ridiculously cute andohh, the hints to romance, yes yes. I'm glad it was in Kakashi's pov. Good job. :D
| Pervert Bitch chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
So poignant but fun too. Team 7 should all marry to each other XD
| vikkaayBYAH chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Ah, I LOVE these kind of stories. You did amazing, as always :] And it wasn't organized, but it delightfully was.. if that makes sense? I like how it wasn't really centered on a certain character, too, so everyone got their 'say'.
Oh, and it was in Kakashi's POV, right?
Thank you for writing! .