|Reviews for supernova|
| C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
*Crying tears of joy* THIS IS BETTER THAN POETRY! IT'S BEAUTIFUL!
| al2010 chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Wow, that was amazing! It was completely believable and the relationships seemed in character. Great job!
| AGENT KELL chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
It's a good try. :D
I love the Team 7 dynamics, they'll forever be special to me. A plus would be the sneaky SasuSaku-ness inside this.
| MidniteCurse4Eternity chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
This was good. I liked it. Team 7 fics are just nice.
I loved how Kakashi was the one watching them. And the way you wrote this was nice. The whole earth, sun, sea thing just matches them.
And I've read Amity. This was similar, but it was different at the same time. 3
| LacrimosaDiesIlla chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Aww I love how you put team 7 together. Like, after the timeskip, how it would be if they got back together. I totally could see that to be their dynamic. And poor Kakashi feeling all left out until the end! Oh, well, he's still included after all (I mean, he was the person that made them care so much about teamwork and eachother, kinda.)
| Arie chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
TOO similar to Amity.
| Lina Mistress of Elements chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
IT's really good
and I have read Amity by annie sparklecakes
| ribbons-paws chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
“Hey, teme, would you hate me if I married her one day?”
“No,” Sasuke replies easily, “because you won’t be marrying her.”
“She’ll be marrying me.”
- That was incredible cute. And so was the fic, overall. :)
| AspergianStoryteller chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Very good. Team 7 centric fics are totally awesome and lovely to read about. If they have happy endings that is. :)
| HoliMoliCow chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Really loved this, especially the sneaky sasusaku :)
I loved the whole sun sea earth thing, even if naruto as the sun and sakura as the earth is a bit overused, its still good. Sasuke as the sea was new to me though, and i thought it fit him really well!
Keep on writing please! D
| Okuyukashii chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
I love your style. Team 7 is just so fun to read, too.
There is one sentence that reads, "I have the honor to witness this." Perhaps you should consider 'of witnessing this'? Also, I normally don't mind sentence fragments, but some of yours sound a little awkward in the context it's in. "Which it undeniably is," is a little weird, for example, but "When it's unnatural," is slightly better because of the sentence before.
The sentences that go, "It’s them who made all of this possible,"—would they be better in a different tense, like "...who have made..."?
"...harp on Naruto do the housework," should have a 'to' after Naruto. Naruto is so sweet, I love how you say that he does those little things.
(As you can probably tell, I'm writing this as I read. I'm trying to review more thoroughly, more often XD)
-squeal- Team 7 teamwork. I will never get tired of reading that. I like the battle part.
This—"...feel about you—your or Naruto," should be a 'you', not 'your'.
I don't understand this sentence—"Sasuke will say that he needs to brute force and the stamina that Sakura doesn’t have..." Do you mean that Sasuke needs Naruto's brute force or something? The sentence that that's in has so many commas. I think there are some you can take out and still keep the meaning.
Ah yes, Sakura and Sasuke are both freakishly bipolar XD Poor Naruto.
Maybe you can take out the ", that will" in "...never have I seen a team that is so in tune with each other, that will remain in tune."
It was awesome! Aside from those little things that most people don't even see, it was sweet, and it was very meaningful. And in parts of it, you can even feel what Kakashi does, which is very nice (he sounds a little bitter sometimes...) Great job!
Sorry for the long review. Eheh.
| with eyes looking up chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
DKJSAHFKJ I LOVED THIS. everything about this was perfect. your pretty little metaphors and your amazing dialogue and how smooth it all was. i loved loved loved it. :) amazing work!
| Affectionate chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
wow, this was utterly amazing! I love how Kakashi is the one telling everything. and the last paragraph was heart warming!
totally awesome. I love how you can come up with such cute, meaningful oneshots. and the sea, sun, earth thing was so perfect for their characters
| Abra Cadaverous chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Um, well, you did ask... So I'll tell you that this doesn't seem up to par with what you usually write, and I did like it as much as a lot of the other stuff you've posted, but it's still good.