God this was the stupidest thing I've ever read. Normal people and families don't do that. Like I cannot control the urge to jump into my screen the beat the bloody hell out of everyone in this chapter. Please tell me you have someone slap the sense into the lot of them, damn hypocrites. I hate the overprotective thing, like I get wanting to protect the people you care about but this is actually the dumbest thing I've ever seen. And also why do they take this shit? If I were in this fic I would've hexed their balls off the first time they tried to "protect" me. Like they are actually so disrespectful it amazes me. Not to mention the blatant sexism.

Ohh, I feel Lily's storyline will be very interesting

craaazy story so many twists and turns! Thanks for your dedication to it, it's the fastest I've ever finished a story! Awesome work! heading over to the sequel now!

I hate albus and scorpius. Truly. Rose didn’t deserve any of that y’all

James equals idiot

HOW DARE YOU
HOW DID YOU EVEN FUCKING DARE TO CALL GINNY WEASLEY STUPID AND NOT ENOUGH FOR THE BOY WHO LIVED.
HE IS NOT ENOUGH FOR HER!
godammit people thinking they're better than ginny fucking weasley is just so infuriating
go to hell, will you?

I really really liked your story. I just didn’t quite like the whole Dominique and Teddy love story thing. Also I would like to see what happens between Lily, Jake, and Jacob.

Are you a teenager Rodney's good but it's amazing how teenagers think relationships are all over and lace over after the first girl dumps them this would have been better if you were to just move the f*** on and said f*** her and focus on

I slept with Craig what a great cliffhanger no no entiendo probably get together but it would be awesome to change just cursed her told her to go f*** herself and then beat the s*** out of Craig and left Hogwarts

Chapter 30 was great Scorpius is literally perfect punching bag for James's anger I really

So you repeatedly say Dom's not a hore then she turns out to be a f****** w**** God you're stupid f****** c***

This whole curse people and get thrown out is stupid they were unable to do that when Dumbledore was there and Death Eaters were working the school during the James and Lily and now you curse somebody because they did something offensive when you get kicked out the whole premise

Story is very well written that's why I like nexr gen coul

you have to come up with your own story and these characters are good but the quickest thing is stupid because there's no way that James will get rid of a keeper for a beater especially one who called his cousin asking to see his wand so that part was kind of stupid but pay you're not really a sports fan

PLEASE post! It would be fantastic!

Oh, Lily. I just, I think she’s taking it too far. She doesn’t have to be like this, and I was so proud during her confrontation with Laura but now...
How could she DO that to Jake? That was horrible of her! Agh.
And that at the end? “She knew how much they needed her, when the truth was that right now all she felt she needed from them in return was the surname.” Good, that was terrible! Agh, Lily!
(So frustrated)
(Great ending, too—you started with Lily, now you’re ending with her too)