Reviews for Complications
MariaWolf14 chapter 10 . 5/18/2010
that was really good.I loved that make some more.
burning.x.impossibly.x.bright chapter 10 . 5/18/2010
Chloe's mom gave some good advice there ;) and it was nice that Chloe got to see her even if she couldn't stay, and it's even better that she seemed to approve of Derek :D

Well I think Chloe can do it, her mom does too, and so does Chloe now so she's all set! :D

Awesome job! Can't wait to read some more! :D
HolaIt'sEmily chapter 10 . 5/18/2010
"What? You're not even a little curious as to how she knows all this? Or even what the afterlife is like?" Melody asked.

Would've been better if her head was slightly tilted and she was eating a Mc Flurry. Other than that, good. Wishy-Washy, but all the chapters kinda have been. Don't take offense to that. I don't mean it in a bad way. Just kinda... Out There.
Madame-DiscoBloodbath chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
u kno wat said a bout guys with facial peircings ? soooooo true and good chapter
xxGh0st chapter 10 . 5/18/2010
this was good:)

update soon!

plz:)
the.STARS.and.I.say.GOODBYE chapter 10 . 5/18/2010
Yay! I luv this! I can't belive, it, the babies kicked! I'm so happy!
the.STARS.and.I.say.GOODBYE chapter 9 . 5/14/2010
I love your STORY!ITZ AWESOME! I really luv how the babies already have powerz! More Pleaze!
tipsy111 chapter 9 . 5/5/2010
FINISH THIS! please it is amazing
Ultimate chapter 9 . 5/5/2010
ok, so this is so good, and i would LOVE it if u would update son!
ListeningToYou chapter 9 . 5/2/2010
Are you ever going to update?
MariaWolf14 chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
I love the story, please write another chapter.
LoV YA ShAnE chapter 9 . 4/30/2010
i love your story ...and Melody shes like awesome keep up the awesome work lawl
UltimateFreedom chapter 9 . 4/24/2010
col, rlly god, but what a cliff hanger! write more! i rlly enjoyed the way u ddnt jsut make derek and simon do the i'm sorry i forgive u thing, its a process, very realistic. loved it!
Angel girl chapter 9 . 4/23/2010
plz plz plz write more
Ur Sarcastic Bitch XD chapter 9 . 4/22/2010
awesome cant wait for more!
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