Reviews for All the Better
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Stunning. That was simply... Wow I don't really know what to say...
Captivating, unique, accurate?
The atmosphere was perfect, I just love the way you've done every aspect- incredible! Thanks for writing your amazing work!
a-rab chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
I've started watching bleach and now i can actually understand ur fanfics... yeh

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The Bad Joke chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Wow, that was just. . .amazing. I loved the haunting mood that leaked out of the story. Also, I adore how lyrically/poetically written it is. The repetition was admirable, as well.

You did a wonderful job. I really liked it. I wish you luck on future stories.
Dark Angel Of Fire Ice chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
That was fantastic. I love the imagery. Very well done.
Clio S.S chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
One of the best Bleach fanfics I've read so far, for sure. You have used the words in an absolutely fantastic way, so that every little piece of that text seems just perfect. The overall climate of this story is so extremely poetic and miraculous, and at the same time one can very clearly imagine what happens between the two of them. The composition is fabulous and the way you proceed with the story fascinates.

Today, we've been discussing with my friend about Gin's and Izuru's role in this text. Gin is a predator in here, a wolf, while Izuru is a prey, a lamb - obviously. What is most interesting is that Izuru more wishes to be manipulated than Gin is actually trying to do, in my humble opinion. At the same time, due to this "nature references" it seems that everything that happens here is natural and just as it should be.

For a moment, I was musing over the erotic aspect of this story - actually it's not necessary, you could as well describe their "normal" relation, but it fits perfectly here.

Wonderful piece of art. Congratulations. Thanks for sharing!
mersielopez1live.com chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
That was beautifully written. I loved the whole reference to Little Red Riding Hood. Excellent job and I hope to see more stories from you!
manjuria chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
This is fantastic. As simple as that.

I love the construction, both disturbing and exciting. The language you use is simple but it's beautiful in its simplicity, so well matching the fairy tale atmosphere.

And, of course, this pairing shown in such a way... So perfect.

Thanks for sharing!
mitsu-kun chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
freakin' awesome