I have read this so many times already but it still makes me ball my eyes out. I just put my face creams on to cry them all off.

This romantic interest from Boromir feels so forced and doesn't fit into the story at all.

Has someone been saying nasty things to Lalaith, and it just isn’t recorded here? Because her insecurity has gotten ridiculous. 1000 years of nobility and royalty telling her, “We love you, it doesn’t matter about your unknown family history, we love you, we love you,” and constantly acting loving toward her— yet it still hasn’t gotten through to her? Instead of feeling sympathetic for her feeling of inferiority, I only feel annoyed that she’s acting so thick.

Splendid story

The only thing I have to say is I really wish you supplied the translations of what is being said in elvish.

And I'm sobbing. Poor Boromir ): Your writing is wonderful.

I've read the first and second of this trilogy, but I kind of got disinterested during the second one and then I just stopped reading the third. I felt like there were too many issues with Legolas and Lalaith's relationship. I don't know just my opinion.

Absolutely love! Lalaith and Legolas are the perfect couple

OMG this book is amazingly written. I have to say, this fanfic is the best I have ever read!

Wow. Amazing story! Loved it! Amazing character descriptions and plot.

I must say when I first started reading this, I thought that Lalaith would be a typical Mary Sue but she's not. You have actually given her a likeable personality but with flaws that make her relatable. Though being the daughter of Manwe and Varda still makes her a bit of a Sue but Lalaith and your writing skills has made this one of my favourite stories

I enjoyed this story but I felt as if Lalaith was too emotionally weak at times (not concerning Legolas).

I'm so glad legolas is don't being stupid lol! You made me cry!

Great intro! can't wait to read the rest.

This is only the first chapter but it's really well written and I can't wait until I get the chance to read more.