heh some witty banter, and a betting Malfoy.

Great story so far. Doesn't this make a paradox?

I like it so far. To be frank, I love time travel stories :D They're one of the coolest bunch.

I also liked the way how you started the story. It was fun to read but there's just one thing it's missing - am. When I started reading this, I thought it was a sequel to a fanfic you've written before this - and I checked your user profile to see if there were other stories... but ._. there was none. Meh. I guess I was too excited at the idea that you've written more about Harry and Tom - and his stay in Voldemort's time.

Hum. You will explain this by the coming chapters right? I'll wait for that. :3 Cuz... it was sorta confusing - that they travel all the way to the future to meet harry.

Questions like. What do they want? Do they want Harry back in their time? And another about Voldemort.

What are you planning to do with the older version of Tom. How does Harry's travel back to the past change his relationship with Voldemort - or will there be no change at all? ._. :3 And... I'm curious at what exactly was Harry's role. Will be waiting for your update o

-emri

Can't wait to see what Tommy makes of Voldie! XD

Zevi Prince is smexy. Abraxas is hot. Cygnus Lestrange is Cygnus Lestrange. A Lestrange, really. Haha. That makes NO sense, but yah. Heehee. O.o

Bai!

Shit, this is a freaking good idea. Got more amazing plot bunnies inside your head? smirk

Anyway, this would have been probably MORE if you had started with Harry's jump into the past. It would make it more interesting, showing Harrison Evan's development and relationships formed in Tom's time. It would also garner more reviews and readers. :)

There are a few small typos here and there, but nothing glaring. Longer chapters are recommended.

If it isn't too much trouble, please use quotation marks ["..."] during typing up conversations. Apostrophes ['..'] are often used when the characters are in thought, but I think you already know that. :) Not that you really need to do so, as you are the writer and all. No pressure. grin

Is this slash? TMRHP? HPTMR? Or not? I would prefer that it is. cackles

'nuff rambling.

This... is freaking, AWESOME! XD Quite a plot there. :) Very original. Not many would think of that, since they restrict their imaginations with the bounderies of time travel, paradoxes, and possible changes in the future. You also have good grammar, though with a bit of misuse of characters [',";...] and spelling mistakes that I'm too lazy and cruel to point out. XP

I would definitely LOVE IT if you write longer chapters [as said before] and update regularly. I'm a bit irked when amazing and brilliant authors update their equally amazing and brilliant fics once every two years or so, making the avid readers wait and wait and wait, never satisfied with their cravings. Not that I blame them [the authors XP], since I'm an author myself. RL [Real Life] can be /such/ a bitch sometimes [ALWAYS!].

Well, whatever. Just keep up the good work. :))

cheers!

XxsneakydevxX

p.s. Update MORE! Real life LESS! YEAH! XD

Very, very very well done. I really grabs your attention! I loved it.

All that I see that needs work is your grammer so far. At the end you put you're when it should have been your.

Can't wait for more!

Kirby

THIS IS SPECTACULAR! IT NEEDS MORE REVIEWS! MORE REVIEWS! Please update soon! :)

AH! You cannot keep my hanging like this damn you! write more write more write more! And your language simone! :O tutt tutt *Shakes head disapprovingly* Never mind :D I forgive the last word becuase your writing thus far has been quite interesting, you have a good polt - again, and your use of dialogue is once again impecable, although I must say, you really need a proof reader, I'll do it for you if you like (one time offer)

Why would you be insecure about this story? It's awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Hi! I wasn't going to review yet, but then I re-read this story, because it amused me so much.

So, here I am, to tell you that your idea is great! and I plan on reading it, so please! keep writing and posting it, ok?

love the story! love the idea!

love the way Tom and Harry talk to each other!

waiting for more soon!

Sat and laughed thru both chappies! Can't wait to read more! Interesting premise! I agree, not seen this one before and I really enjoy the idea! lol..Can't wait to see what Tom makes of Voldie!

I like it, love it even, and you're very welcome for the review.

Wow, great story. This is new, I like it.

Amazing start, I'm already hooked! Can't wait for more! :)

You have my attention. Sounds interesting thus far. Can't wait for more. :]