Reviews for My Fault
Plasma Knight chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
This is a beautiful fic :) Love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
I'm normally not a Vita fan but this made me cheer for her.

You write without the cliche you find in other authors. This makes your fics look less fantasy like and harder than the rest. It is good for this type of fic but I suppose that it would be hard to write a romance like this, at least a happy one.

Keep on going!
ZonaRose chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
I liked it very much.
GoldenDragon326 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Wonderful! Completely wonderful! .
MGLNS chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
true that there isnt enough vita stories and this was a really good and written story, hope more vita stories would be produced. Thxs for the hard in writting these well written stories most appreciated.
Crosswood chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
Damn fine writing!

The flow is excellent, the characters are actually in character (which no mean feat) the formatting is great, the spelling is flawless... am I gushing? Yes. But this story is worth it.

There isn't enough Vita on this site; this is tragic, because she's a character basically made of pure awesome. Beyond that there really isn't enough good writing on this site, but this story was worth trolling through the other stuff for. Thanks, and bloody well done.
trichi chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
AMAZING, thats all i can say