Reviews for Memory Loss
EmiEmi96 chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
What the hell?
One: Name of a place is used in capitals "Soul Society" and name of a race/occupation "Soul Reaper"
Two: Tessai
Three: Capitals after periods/full stops "."
Four: If someone new is talking, you start a new line.
Five: Yoruichi
Six: Kuchiki
Seven: Heal
Eight: Please use commas ","
Nine: Why aren't Uryu's powers working properly?
Ten: Bankai
Eleven: Byakuya
Twelve: Rukia doesn't act like that. Neither does Orihime. Maybe you could have put in a warning for "OOC?"
Thirteen: Kurosaki
Fourteen: Senbonzakura.
krysten chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
that was funny